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Array ( [sid] => 42814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Did This [time] => 2004-04-11 21:44:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The issue is gone, things should be fine
But I still don't feel like you're only mine
I still feel hurt, you still don't care
So I swallow these pills to make things fair
With thinning blood I slice my veins
Knowing nothing could be the same
I feel you don't care, that it's not me you love
And maybe I tried too hard, or maybe not enough
Why can't you see the pain I still feel
Why can't our love again be real
This shouldn't have happened, why again me
It doesn't matter now, my blood flows free
I should've been better, medication might of helped
But I didn't have your support and it couldn't cure the pain I felt. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 286 [topic] => 36 [informant] => CuttersAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

You Did This

Contributed by CuttersAngel on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:44:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The issue is gone, things should be fine
But I still don't feel like you're only mine
I still feel hurt, you still don't care
So I swallow these pills to make things fair
With thinning blood I slice my veins
Knowing nothing could be the same
I feel you don't care, that it's not me you love
And maybe I tried too hard, or maybe not enough
Why can't you see the pain I still feel
Why can't our love again be real
This shouldn't have happened, why again me
It doesn't matter now, my blood flows free
I should've been better, medication might of helped
But I didn't have your support and it couldn't cure the pain I felt.

Copyright © CuttersAngel ... [ 2004-04-11 21:44:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You Did This (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:51:53 PM AEST
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this sounds exactly like something i would have written two months ago when i pretty much did what this poem describes. a very realistic picture. great write. keep it up!

addie

Re: You Did This (User Rating: 1 )
by sheri on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:52:10 PM AEST
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Wow. Very sad,very powerful. Hope you are feelign better.

Re: You Did This (User Rating: 1 )
by MyLastBreath on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:53:41 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. I dig your writing style.

"Why can't our love again be real
This shouldn't have happened, why again me"

I can relate!

I hope things get better! :)

Peace

Re: You Did This (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:35:10 AM AEST
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Great write! very powerful and heartfelt. I can clearly see your emotions in this and the fire that burns inside. I can relate to this poem totally, so good job and I hope to read more from you :)

Re: You Did This (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:39:40 AM AEST
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Great write! very powerful and heartfelt. I can clearly see your emotions in this and the fire that burns inside. I can relate to this poem totally, so good job and I hope to read more from you :)

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