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Thumper's Fait
Contributed by
Thumper0719
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:52:44 PM in AEST
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Thumper's fait is in his hands. He has some evil plans. He wants to hurt her bad. Thumper's fait his in his hands. But she wishes that they werent. Because she knows real pain will come soon. Foe everyone will know the truth. She will be disgraced and maybe even misplaced. Her death will be worshiped. Her death will please many. But she's got to remeber this iant any normal place. If you have ever looked into the face of evil, then you would no this place. Thumper's fait is in his hands. He's got some evil plans. He wants to hurt her bad. So she has got to get out of there. But she cant.... Because her fait is in his hands...
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Re: Thumper's Fait
(User Rating: 1 ) by Queen_Dolly on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:54:10 PM AEST (User
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Very powerful words.
It holds the sense of a struggle.
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Re: Thumper's Fait
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:19:01 PM AEST (User
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Your fate is in your own hands my friend....
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Re: Thumper's Fait
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:40:10 PM AEST (User
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I liked your perspestive.
For some reason reminds me of Trent.
Not that it sounded like him, but the feelings it stirred as I read it. I had a feeling of a victim
with glossy pearl eyes lasting till death. While blood runs, infront servants chant and kneel.
I don't want to die, but what can I do. I'm bound and gagged, bleeding ...
Well I liked it. good job. |
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