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Array ( [sid] => 42718 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TIME V/S DESTINY [time] => 2004-04-11 07:55:53 [hometext] => CHECK IT FOR ESTIMATING THE TRUE VALUE OF TIME & MIRACLES OF DESTINY [bodytext] => The history lapses, present endures in its stride and the time goes on,
Fresh leaves conceal the trees and the parched ones are gone;
With the wheel of life running to pace, destiny is ought to play its part,
It forces one to cut stiff bars, and for other defines fine work of art;
Every tinkle of running clock brings a new lesson to study,
We may be subtle or robust, plays its game to make us ready;
Passing ages leaves the mark to traverse the future route,
Makes the lane to let us chuckle, or trigger the faces mute;
Brilliant sparkles pervade the present,
Turns to burning ambers, from ridge we descent;
Perhaps the turn leads the trail in splendid direction,
Where we find the end knot to our conviction;
Who has ever combat with time,
Or won destiny before the crime;
The vicious circle swivel eternally to frame our life,
At times its squashy as froth, the other is spiky as a knife;
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TIME VS DESTINY

Contributed by prajwal on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:55:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The history lapses, present endures in its stride and the time goes on,
Fresh leaves conceal the trees and the parched ones are gone;
With the wheel of life running to pace, destiny is ought to play its part,
It forces one to cut stiff bars, and for other defines fine work of art;
Every tinkle of running clock brings a new lesson to study,
We may be subtle or robust, plays its game to make us ready;
Passing ages leaves the mark to traverse the future route,
Makes the lane to let us chuckle, or trigger the faces mute;
Brilliant sparkles pervade the present,
Turns to burning ambers, from ridge we descent;
Perhaps the turn leads the trail in splendid direction,
Where we find the end knot to our conviction;
Who has ever combat with time,
Or won destiny before the crime;
The vicious circle swivel eternally to frame our life,
At times its squashy as froth, the other is spiky as a knife;

Copyright © prajwal ... [ 2004-04-11 07:55:53]
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Re: TIME VS DESTINY (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:50:37 AM AEST
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hell, this is the most complex poem i have read on here, sorry but i have to read it a few more times, maybe i ain't awake enough. But i understand enough of it to say it is wonderfully thought out, and laid out with such tremendous depth, wow. I love reads like these they are always brilliant in my eyes. Well done...shall definately read later.

Silent

Re: TIME VS DESTINY (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:53:54 AM AEST
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intriguing poem so very well written...you deserve 5 stars fot this excellent write!

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Faith

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