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[title] => ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
[time] => 2004-04-11 02:48:49
[hometext] => about my family and how I am the only 1 who gives a crap my bro got his gf preg and now left her and this kid already has no future cuz no one wants to help out cuz its no ones problem...
[bodytext] => I wish I could turn back the hands, and forget all thats been done
Maybe move into the ocean where there isnt anyone
Leaving all the ones around me with their frozen hearts behind
Perhaps that would be easy, but itd save me lots of time
No more fighting useless battles, they could all be put aside
I wonder what would happen if I would disappear
Would my life be perfect harmony, and be free from all these tears?
Could my worries quickly vanish, and take visions of my past
Could you free me of my struggles and all these stupid tasks
I wish that it didnt matter if I truely cared, I wish the world coincide
Nevermind I take that back.....
I wish that I didnt care!
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''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:48:49 AM in AEST
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I wish I could turn back the hands, and forget all thats been done
Maybe move into the ocean where there isnt anyone
Leaving all the ones around me with their frozen hearts behind
Perhaps that would be easy, but itd save me lots of time
No more fighting useless battles, they could all be put aside
I wonder what would happen if I would disappear
Would my life be perfect harmony, and be free from all these tears?
Could my worries quickly vanish, and take visions of my past
Could you free me of my struggles and all these stupid tasks
I wish that it didnt matter if I truely cared, I wish the world coincide
Nevermind I take that back.....
I wish that I didnt care!
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JennyFruFru
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2004-04-11 02:48:49]
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:54:46 AM AEST
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Oh this is so sad but very well said.
You'd be miserable if u didn't care.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, hope and happy Easter,
emy |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:55:23 AM AEST
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Truly a wonderful write.... The futility just kills ya, doesn't it?
Don't ever stop caring... you make a difference, even if you don't see it right away..
Jenni |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:58:03 AM AEST
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Oh How Sad...Like Emy Said You Would Be So Miserable If You Didn't Care....Great Write
Even Though Very Sad.... And Yes You Can Print My Poem Out If You Like.....
Thank You For Your Wonderful Comment On It...
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:58:48 AM AEST
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| If it were all taken back, then there would not be you, and without you there would be no world worth it at all. I know how you feel, sometimes like we yell into the wind. But the sound carries on the wind, and reaches hearts untold. Great write, thank you so much for sharing. Thank you also for caring. |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by arden on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:04:12 AM AEST
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such a deep and meaningful write , full of emotion and saddness.
but written so well. the flow was lovely.
a great write. keep strong.
Arden |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:30:35 AM AEST
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I know where your coming from here i go through stages of thinking no one else bothers so why do i?
Then it dawns on me i have higher standards than them and i 'aint gonna lower myself to their level,! it can still be frustrating though. good write.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:27:10 PM AEST
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its suppose to say
I wish the world would coincidebut im ann idiot and forgot that word sorry guys |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:32:10 PM AEST
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IT'S GREAT PEOPLE LIKE YOU THAT MAKE THE WORLD A MUCH BETTER PLACE! SO PLEASE DON'T GO OR DISAPPEAR-WE'D ALL MISS YOU!!
LOL-DAN!!!
NICE POEM!!!! |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by venkat on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:47:59 AM AEST
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| even though sad, it is wonderful work. venkat |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:24:25 PM AEST
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Emystar and Loveisendless are right. It's people like you who make a differance. Maybe you can't change the world right away, but you can change your family and friends, people around you. They can change your community. Little by little, you can change the world.
Take care.
David |
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Re: ''Stop trying to fix the world Jenn... '' ( thnx Dad :( )
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:21:04 PM AEST
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| Wow this was sad. I could say you made your point a cross. I don't have much to say but I do like it. |
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