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Array ( [sid] => 42697 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wonder.... [time] => 2004-04-11 01:32:51 [hometext] => I wonder why we silly people always fall in love?....why?....thr are only a few people who get success & rest of them burn in the flames of grief...(like me)... [bodytext] => I wonder lonely across the field
trying to understand the way I feel
Yet, I cannot describe it in words.

The flowers are smiling
Dancing and ceaselessly hugging!
Wishing I could do the same.

How could you have broken my heart?
I thought it was love right from the start!
But I was wrong.

My trust has been spurned
Good lessons I have learned!
What is left there to say?

The birds are singing
Telling me to leave the past behind.
The blue sky gives me hope to stand

I know that I’ll see you again
Whatever happens and come what may,
I wont do the same mistake That had caused me heart ache.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 48 [informant] => hot-shot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I Wonder....

Contributed by hot-shot on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:32:51 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I wonder lonely across the field
trying to understand the way I feel
Yet, I cannot describe it in words.

The flowers are smiling
Dancing and ceaselessly hugging!
Wishing I could do the same.

How could you have broken my heart?
I thought it was love right from the start!
But I was wrong.

My trust has been spurned
Good lessons I have learned!
What is left there to say?

The birds are singing
Telling me to leave the past behind.
The blue sky gives me hope to stand

I know that I’ll see you again
Whatever happens and come what may,
I wont do the same mistake That had caused me heart ache.

Copyright © hot-shot ... [ 2004-04-11 01:32:51]
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Re: I Wonder.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Luxx on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:57:52 AM AEST
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wow..thats really good...i like it...loads..

Re: I Wonder.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:07:25 AM AEST
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I can feel the emotion completely.

But dont give up! Keep hoping for the fairy-tale stuff, because it's more real than "real life". See if it isn't in the end!
Take care.
Andrew

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