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Array ( [sid] => 42677 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drowning In The Screams [time] => 2004-04-10 22:20:17 [hometext] => Can't be saved...Amoungst the damned.. [bodytext] => In this room of forgotten souls
Lost amoungst the faces
It is here I have always been
Here always
I shall remain

This cycle has not stopped
The chaos is too much
Always everyday
The same d*** actions
Same d*** words

This constant cleansing
Trying to be clean
To wash away the blood
Stained upon my hands
The blood of my own arms
The blood of my own soul
Never does this blood
Rid itself away

The walls around me break
I hear the splintering of wood
My mind has lost all sanity
Thanks to that one man

He is why I lost my way
Why my life is such a waste
Everyday I think of him
And all the pain that man has caused

I tried and tried to keep
My poor heart safe from him
But he took it
And he broke it
No remorse was felt from him

So try and scream I may
But nothing will they hear
All these lost souls
Each one of us is drowning
Drowning in our screams [comments] => 5 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => night_child [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Drowning In The Screams

Contributed by night_child on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:20:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



In this room of forgotten souls
Lost amoungst the faces
It is here I have always been
Here always
I shall remain

This cycle has not stopped
The chaos is too much
Always everyday
The same d*** actions
Same d*** words

This constant cleansing
Trying to be clean
To wash away the blood
Stained upon my hands
The blood of my own arms
The blood of my own soul
Never does this blood
Rid itself away

The walls around me break
I hear the splintering of wood
My mind has lost all sanity
Thanks to that one man

He is why I lost my way
Why my life is such a waste
Everyday I think of him
And all the pain that man has caused

I tried and tried to keep
My poor heart safe from him
But he took it
And he broke it
No remorse was felt from him

So try and scream I may
But nothing will they hear
All these lost souls
Each one of us is drowning
Drowning in our screams




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Re: Drowning In The Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:26:32 PM AEST
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wow. its just......wow. you expressed this in a way that i wish that i could. awesome. i know exactly what it feels like to be drowning in your own internal screams. i feel it every day. hold on. great write!

addie


Re: Drowning In The Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by jmt25607 on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:30:55 PM AEST
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theres only one thing that i could say about this poem I love it lol its great woundewrful writeing and i wish i could write this way and exspress my feels in the way that u do---- well great keep it up ---- jessika


Re: Drowning In The Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:42:51 PM AEST
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great write


Re: Drowning In The Screams (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:45:49 PM AEST
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This flow is so........beautiful.....it captures the emotional torture of us crippled pilgrims.......
well done.

The SecretWind......


Re: Drowning In The Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 12:29:48 AM AEST
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WOW!! is right ... what an inpact ur words make and what an impression they have left imprinted upon ones's soul... Whoa!!! Great wrote... the emotions are well expressed...
~Donna~




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