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Array ( [sid] => 42637 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can't get you off of my mind [time] => 2004-04-10 17:41:45 [hometext] => Love changes the feelings and thoughts of people, and sometimes it shatters into pieces [bodytext] => As I sit here,
I image us together,
And I see a clear,
Picture of us forever,
And as the beautiful sun,
Goes down,
You will always be the one,
Who would be around,
Cause your kiss was like thunder,
That will never end,
And that's probably why,
I can't get u off of my mind

You may have another lover,
But that's about to end,
Cause I'm tired of sitting here,
And thinking you don't care about me,
It's time to see,
That we both love each other,
And care for one another,
I know apart of you is going crazy for me,
And that's probably why,
You can't get me off of your mind

The other day I saw you,
I could of just melted to the floor,
You have more,
Than just words,
But you have love in your heart,
You still belong to someone else,
I just can't help myself,
You need me,
And I need you,
Come find me,
And take me to,
That paradise hidden somewhere out there,
Cause I can't bare,
Not to let go of you,
What should we do?,
This is probably why,
We can't stay off of each other's minds [comments] => 2 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 32 [informant] => luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I can't get you off of my mind

Contributed by luckycharm on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

As I sit here,
I image us together,
And I see a clear,
Picture of us forever,
And as the beautiful sun,
Goes down,
You will always be the one,
Who would be around,
Cause your kiss was like thunder,
That will never end,
And that's probably why,
I can't get u off of my mind

You may have another lover,
But that's about to end,
Cause I'm tired of sitting here,
And thinking you don't care about me,
It's time to see,
That we both love each other,
And care for one another,
I know apart of you is going crazy for me,
And that's probably why,
You can't get me off of your mind

The other day I saw you,
I could of just melted to the floor,
You have more,
Than just words,
But you have love in your heart,
You still belong to someone else,
I just can't help myself,
You need me,
And I need you,
Come find me,
And take me to,
That paradise hidden somewhere out there,
Cause I can't bare,
Not to let go of you,
What should we do?,
This is probably why,
We can't stay off of each other's minds

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-04-10 17:41:45]
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Re: I can't get you off of my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by face-in-the-crowd on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 06:42:22 PM AEST
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Another beautiful write! Great job!

Re: I can't get you off of my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:49:08 AM AEST
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Very Very well done. enjoyable read, thanks

Silent

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