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THOUGHTS RUNNING IN AND OUT OF
MY MIND-
MY HEART YEARNS
I CRY
I HURT SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!
NO ONE TO TALK TO
NO ONE TO SHARE WITH
ALONE
AFRAID
DREAMING
WONDERING - ABOUT SO MANY THINGS
HOPING
PRAYING- GOD GET ME THROUGH THIS!
.MY LIFE'S IN SHAMBLES
MY WORLD FALLING IN ALL AROUND ME-
I'M CHOKING ON THE FRESH BROWN DIRT... STILL A LITTLE MUDDY FROM THE
RAIN-

BURIED ALIVE

OR AM I REALLY DEAD.... BUT.....
DOES DEATH REALLY HURT THIS MUCH?

AND I CRY - MORE AND MORE EACH DAY
OR AT LEAST MY HEART DOES...
AND THE PAIN-
SLASHED WITH A RAZOR SHARP BLADE....

AND MY SOUL IS BLEEDING!
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PRECIOUSBECKY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

BURIED ALIVE

Contributed by PRECIOUSBECKY on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:20:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I SIT IN THIS ROOM THINKING-
THOUGHTS RUNNING IN AND OUT OF
MY MIND-
MY HEART YEARNS
I CRY
I HURT SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!
NO ONE TO TALK TO
NO ONE TO SHARE WITH
ALONE
AFRAID
DREAMING
WONDERING - ABOUT SO MANY THINGS
HOPING
PRAYING- GOD GET ME THROUGH THIS!
.MY LIFE'S IN SHAMBLES
MY WORLD FALLING IN ALL AROUND ME-
I'M CHOKING ON THE FRESH BROWN DIRT... STILL A LITTLE MUDDY FROM THE
RAIN-

BURIED ALIVE

OR AM I REALLY DEAD.... BUT.....
DOES DEATH REALLY HURT THIS MUCH?

AND I CRY - MORE AND MORE EACH DAY
OR AT LEAST MY HEART DOES...
AND THE PAIN-
SLASHED WITH A RAZOR SHARP BLADE....

AND MY SOUL IS BLEEDING!

Copyright © PRECIOUSBECKY ... [ 2004-04-10 17:20:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BURIED ALIVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:24:18 PM AEST
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Such agony of the spirit.....
Well done.
Larry

Re: BURIED ALIVE (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 02:42:24 PM AEST
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PAIN IS SOMETHING WE ALL SEEM TO KNOW AND NAVIGATE FROM TIME TO TIME....HERE
IN THE SHADOWS I ASK THE SAME QUESTION
"DOES DEATH HURT THIS MUCH?" EXCELLENT WRITE.

Re: BURIED ALIVE (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:06:52 PM AEST
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Becky-
You have been through so much in your life and the fact that your still living, writing, and facing this world of numerous evils, is a truly incredible thing to do. I'm so proud of you and happy to say that you are a part of my family!
Peace, love, and, bubblegum!!!

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