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Array ( [sid] => 42631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LAST RELEASE PART 2 [time] => 2004-04-10 16:57:05 [hometext] => i didnt quite finish what i wanted in the first part. enjoy!!!! [bodytext] => He may be older than me, big deal.
But aren’t we as old as we feel?
You made me older than years.
Or even my peers.
You expect me to hang out with kids.
When your will bids.
Treat like an adult when it suits.
Yet when I want to be the adult you cause disputes.
May be he is a little different,
Or may be a little absent.
You don’t see him protect me like his own.
Just imagine us alone.
You think he is going to take my innocence.
With miss guidance.
Sorry to burst your bubble but it’s too late for that.
May be you should have smacked that t**t.
Yes I mean all those years ago.
Sorry was that a low blow?

You look at me and think ‘you silly b****’
Gonna end up in a ditch.
He’s going to use you for his sexual plaything.
You’ll end up banging.
From dawn till dust.
He’ll fill you full of lust.

Sorry to break the illusion.
I’m not a good little Christian.
Sorry mummy but I’m not your little angel anymore.
It became such a bore.
But I’m not a little wh***.
I’m just me,
So let us be.

He won’t hurt me; after all I’m little titch,
But no I’m not his b****.

sorry if the line that meantion's Christain's causes any offense. i dont mean anything by it but if you know me you know how i mean it.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 65 [informant] => little_genna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

LAST RELEASE PART 2

Contributed by little_genna on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

He may be older than me, big deal.
But aren’t we as old as we feel?
You made me older than years.
Or even my peers.
You expect me to hang out with kids.
When your will bids.
Treat like an adult when it suits.
Yet when I want to be the adult you cause disputes.
May be he is a little different,
Or may be a little absent.
You don’t see him protect me like his own.
Just imagine us alone.
You think he is going to take my innocence.
With miss guidance.
Sorry to burst your bubble but it’s too late for that.
May be you should have smacked that t**t.
Yes I mean all those years ago.
Sorry was that a low blow?

You look at me and think ‘you silly b****’
Gonna end up in a ditch.
He’s going to use you for his sexual plaything.
You’ll end up banging.
From dawn till dust.
He’ll fill you full of lust.

Sorry to break the illusion.
I’m not a good little Christian.
Sorry mummy but I’m not your little angel anymore.
It became such a bore.
But I’m not a little wh***.
I’m just me,
So let us be.

He won’t hurt me; after all I’m little titch,
But no I’m not his b****.

sorry if the line that meantion's Christain's causes any offense. i dont mean anything by it but if you know me you know how i mean it.

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-04-10 16:57:05]
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Re: LAST RELEASE PART 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:59:36 PM AEST
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Was Glad 2 read dis!

Persia

Re: LAST RELEASE PART 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 04:27:17 PM AEST
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YOU AND THOMAS JEFFERSON, CANT GIVE EITHER ONE OF YOU A PENCIL OR YOU START CAUSING TROUBLE. IN CASE YOU DON'T KNOW OLD THOMAS WAS OUR THIRD PRESIDENT AND THE MAN WHO WROTE OUR DECLARATION OF INDEPENDECE. A REVERED DOCUMENT THAT EVERY SCHOOL CHILD HAS TO MEMORIZE, IT DECLARED US SPLIT FROM GREAT BRITAIN AND KING GEORGE THE 3DR BECAUSE OF OUR DESIRE FOR FREEDOM AND LIBERTY. BY NOW YOU SHOULD KNOW WHERE I AM GOING WITH THIS STACE. READ LIKE YOUR DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENCE. JUST LIKE OURS, LIST THE GRIEVENCES, THEN TELL OUR ANTAGONISTS TO LEAVE US THE HELL ALONE. SO STACE/ TOM THATS WHAT I THINK.

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