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Wen u almost feel da way
I feel

I can fight it
All the pain
Wrapped in da rain

Dont u kill me
Coz i can hear dem
Screaming, calling...

I can make it
I'll survive
Without da Meds

Dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da Way
I feel

My head full of dem
Da world crawilng
under my skin

Dont u kill me
coz i lay naked
on my car

Artist...Artist save me

But dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da way
I feel

I can fight it
Walk calm in the rain
Wrapped in all my pain

So dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da way
I feel

Beautiful inside
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Dont U Kill Me

Contributed by persia on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:45:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da way
I feel

I can fight it
All the pain
Wrapped in da rain

Dont u kill me
Coz i can hear dem
Screaming, calling...

I can make it
I'll survive
Without da Meds

Dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da Way
I feel

My head full of dem
Da world crawilng
under my skin

Dont u kill me
coz i lay naked
on my car

Artist...Artist save me

But dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da way
I feel

I can fight it
Walk calm in the rain
Wrapped in all my pain

So dont u kill me
Wen u almost feel da way
I feel

Beautiful inside

Copyright © persia ... [ 2004-04-10 16:45:50]
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Re: Dont U Kill Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby1987 on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:18:06 PM AEST
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This is a great write. I like the way it has random parts and then to balance it there is repetition which shows some kind of insanity. It's like you just cant get your point across, or that nobody is listening.

I like this.

Aaliyah(ruby1987)

Re: Dont U Kill Me (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:24:25 PM AEST
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BREATH TAKING

Re: Dont U Kill Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 05:00:45 PM AEST
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well worth the read nice one1

wildej.

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