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Why do you creep
into my dreams...................

Where all things seem possible
and have a way of playing themselves out.
The only place you kiss me on my mouth.....
AND LOVE ME

The only place we will ever be together- the only place that IT never dies-
That our love survives- several minutes after sex.

The only place I'm allowed to lay my head upon your chest-
Sweet surrender- Eternal bliss.

Do you invade intentionally- just to torture me
Or are my dreams the only place you can give yourself completely.

YOU are simply not real

But how could I feel-
so intensely for a DREAM....
For such a wonderful DREAM. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 2 [informant] => PRECIOUSBECKY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

IF ONLY IN A DREAM

Contributed by PRECIOUSBECKY on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:40:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Are you asleep?
Why do you creep
into my dreams...................

Where all things seem possible
and have a way of playing themselves out.
The only place you kiss me on my mouth.....
AND LOVE ME

The only place we will ever be together- the only place that IT never dies-
That our love survives- several minutes after sex.

The only place I'm allowed to lay my head upon your chest-
Sweet surrender- Eternal bliss.

Do you invade intentionally- just to torture me
Or are my dreams the only place you can give yourself completely.

YOU are simply not real

But how could I feel-
so intensely for a DREAM....
For such a wonderful DREAM.

Copyright © PRECIOUSBECKY ... [ 2004-04-10 16:40:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:48:32 PM AEST
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Wow!
Powerful stuff!
GR8 write!

Persia

Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:44:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful emotion. I know exactly how it feels.
Excellent piece. Keep it up!
Anar caluva tielyanna.
(the sun will shine upon your path)
Andrew

Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:58:24 PM AEST
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Ahhh Dreams..... what would be do without them......Lovely write..
Jenni

Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:19:28 PM AEST
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Sweet dreams are the language of the trapped soul when the body can not be.

Long live the dream, and let the dream be free.

Thank you for sharing.

Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:29:07 PM AEST
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beautiful poem, becky. it sucks when you wake up and realize it wasn't real.

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