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Array ( [sid] => 42624 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dad [time] => 2004-04-10 15:56:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i would have never expected that from you....
you were always someone who i looked up too
yea right i laught at that line supposed to be addressed to my so called father
YOUR ******* *****
YOU SO CALLED DAD
i never looked up too you
your nothing
your less than dirt
i hope your happy now, in which the eyes your own daughter views you in
i hope your happy that when i think of you i want to kill you
youve made me cry, you said youd be there
i make myself bleed, thinking its my **** fault your not here
daughter or drugs? which is more important...
i just drag you down right? those were your own words
ACCORDING TO ME I HAVE NO DAD
MY DAD CAN KISS MY *** AND DROP DEAD
***** good for nothing
i could never call you dad and i could never say i love you
if i did, i never meant it
how does it feel to have a daughter who hates you?
i hope you enjoy this feeling, while your smoking your drugs
................its your loss [comments] => 5 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 6 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => Edited for Language by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
dad

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:56:14 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



i would have never expected that from you....
you were always someone who i looked up too
yea right i laught at that line supposed to be addressed to my so called father
YOUR ******* *****
YOU SO CALLED DAD
i never looked up too you
your nothing
your less than dirt
i hope your happy now, in which the eyes your own daughter views you in
i hope your happy that when i think of you i want to kill you
youve made me cry, you said youd be there
i make myself bleed, thinking its my **** fault your not here
daughter or drugs? which is more important...
i just drag you down right? those were your own words
ACCORDING TO ME I HAVE NO DAD
MY DAD CAN KISS MY *** AND DROP DEAD
***** good for nothing
i could never call you dad and i could never say i love you
if i did, i never meant it
how does it feel to have a daughter who hates you?
i hope you enjoy this feeling, while your smoking your drugs
................its your loss




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Re: dad (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:08:25 PM AEST
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Luv Dis!
Dadz make u den ****** leave u-den com back & say dey luv u & neva meant 2 hurt u!

keep writin' girl cos it is good 4 da soul and u don't need ur dad if he hurts u so bad.
I don't got mine and i iz doin' gd and i iz only 16 wit a crib, job & i still go 2 skool!

welldone and keep up da good work!

Persia


Re: dad (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:03:53 PM AEST
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i hear you girl. my dad's a ******* waste of space, me or the alcohol. he chose the alcohol. i relate to this poem so much. keep writing it does you good.

love and hugs
XgenX


Re: dad (User Rating: 1 )
by jmt25607 on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:23:36 PM AEST
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i no how you feel my dad chose drugs and alcolha before me this is not my name am on my friends but i know what your say my dad said he make up for his child sport for 14 years with his income taxs ya he did alright he i was so happy i was going to get contacts and stuff and get some good food for once but he only sent me 3dollors and 75 cents ya it takes 3.75 to raise a child for 14 **** years and he told my bro the same thang my bro in the hospiter now and he needs the ***** money and he wont send us a dime he said he already ***** sent it ya that 3.85 helps alot on the dr bills well sorry i took so much space and ps i told my friend to type this while i was on the phone with her i dont have a comp -----ruth


Re: dad (User Rating: 1 )
by Thivanka on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 12:48:39 AM AEST
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I Feel the anger in your words, I'm sorry. Keep on writing, you're doing good.


Re: dad (User Rating: 1 )
by Coaster on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:10:34 PM AEST
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Wow i can relate to this. I hadn't seen/talked to my dad in 2 months until a couple days ago and he called me to ***** at me about not having good grades. Well thanks a lot for posting this up and I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Ryan




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