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Array ( [sid] => 42607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Uncaged Melodies [time] => 2004-04-10 12:24:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sweet words falter far beyond sound...
Like a distant melody soon to be found.
I' ve been trapped in a cage all my life.
As a bird with it's wings clipped to with hold its might.
My life incaged with troubles and much strife,
I feel that my wings are now strengthen,
for this early morning flight to be ridden.
Through my pains and devastation,
it is now time for me to face this realization.
Now are now I'm finally strengthened for what I bring,
The Good Lord has prepared me for all these things.
I'm so sorry I hurt you so!
Oh dear one please forgive me for I didn't know,
I thought it was best to let you go...
Please hold the good times we laughed and shared.
Please don't ever think I never cared.
All the tremendous love when you touched me with your kind loving hands.
I'm so sorry I simply didn't understand.
You are someone could really love me
just the way that I am.
G G
April 7,2004

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Uncaged Melodies

Contributed by GG on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:24:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sweet words falter far beyond sound...
Like a distant melody soon to be found.
I' ve been trapped in a cage all my life.
As a bird with it's wings clipped to with hold its might.
My life incaged with troubles and much strife,
I feel that my wings are now strengthen,
for this early morning flight to be ridden.
Through my pains and devastation,
it is now time for me to face this realization.
Now are now I'm finally strengthened for what I bring,
The Good Lord has prepared me for all these things.
I'm so sorry I hurt you so!
Oh dear one please forgive me for I didn't know,
I thought it was best to let you go...
Please hold the good times we laughed and shared.
Please don't ever think I never cared.
All the tremendous love when you touched me with your kind loving hands.
I'm so sorry I simply didn't understand.
You are someone could really love me
just the way that I am.
G G
April 7,2004

Copyright © GG ... [ 2004-04-10 12:24:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Uncaged Melodies (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:46:01 PM AEST
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aww, this is so sweet and sad..i hope it works out for you..*hugs* phil xxx

Re: Uncaged Melodies (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:49:49 PM AEST
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wow...beautiful...

Re: Uncaged Melodies (User Rating: 1 )
by Mihiri on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:43:39 PM AEST
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Very emotional and expressive. I like it, it somewhat reminds me of my life as well. Good job, mate!

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