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Array ( [sid] => 42570 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Lifes Reality! [time] => 2004-04-10 07:25:01 [hometext] => It gave me pain to write this so please give it a chance. [bodytext] => I feel worthless,
i feel drained,
the hurting is torturous,
the shadows the same!

i sit outside in the cold,
i'd rather be on my own,
the feeling's not neutral,
but i don't want to be at home!

if i'd let out my rage,
i would have killed someone by now!
people must think it's my, 'teenage, stage'.
but for me its worse than hell!

i cover my emotion,
but inside i'm up in flames!
i keep myself well hidden,
but i'm hurting from these games!

it freaks me out to be here,
it freaks me out to know,
that my dark, laughing, life,
is always here, on show!

that i can't run from it,
because it watches over me!
it's a soul of immortal darkness.
destroyer of comforty!
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My Lifes Reality!

Contributed by deathdrop on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 07:25:01 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I feel worthless,
i feel drained,
the hurting is torturous,
the shadows the same!

i sit outside in the cold,
i'd rather be on my own,
the feeling's not neutral,
but i don't want to be at home!

if i'd let out my rage,
i would have killed someone by now!
people must think it's my, 'teenage, stage'.
but for me its worse than hell!

i cover my emotion,
but inside i'm up in flames!
i keep myself well hidden,
but i'm hurting from these games!

it freaks me out to be here,
it freaks me out to know,
that my dark, laughing, life,
is always here, on show!

that i can't run from it,
because it watches over me!
it's a soul of immortal darkness.
destroyer of comforty!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-04-10 07:25:01]
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Re: My Lifes Reality! (User Rating: 1 )
by AFlockOfSeaGulls on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:38:13 AM AEST
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that was so deep and full of meaning
i like it :)

Re: My Lifes Reality! (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:21:01 AM AEST
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I know not who you are nor or your specific difficulties.. but in some instance I have been there as the write you clearly unfold. Hang on,for it could very well be a teenage stage though you it might not end it could very well mature as well. Anyway I founds confort in myself a haven in my dreams. May you find your way to your harbors of saving grace. Anyway.. aver deep and thoughtful write.. a litany that grieves in the very heart.

Re: My Lifes Reality! (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:06:42 AM AEST
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this reached my heart. i feel these pain maybe not for the same reasons but as always its just put down to the teenage stage. very expressive write. well done!

love and hug
XgenX

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