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Array ( [sid] => 42534 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Deathly Shadow [time] => 2004-04-09 22:38:47 [hometext] => i like this poem, this is the way i feel sometime, stuck in life as a shadow. [bodytext] => Nobody cares,
I'll cry and cry,
But no one will come,

I'm invisible,
A chameleon,
Blending in to life,

I'm nothing,
Just useless air and space,
At one with the walls,

Same colour as the lockers,
Tears stream down my cheeks,
You walk away,

I'm no there to you,
Not to anyone,
No noe knows that I'm even alive,

If I died,
No one will know,
No one will care,

Maybe some family,
But thats all I got,
Alone and in scilence,

I'm afraid to speak,
Afraid of riticule,
To be laughed at,

I prefer to left alone,
Pay no attention to me,
Thats the way I like it,

Yes,
I would like some friends,
If I wasn't so antisocial,

I had a friend,
They used me,
Then left me to die,

Die in my own self pitty,
Alone as I've always liked it,
Curseing the world,

Slowly my blood will seep,
The murder is I,
Suicide my fatal choice,

Yea,
You may say i got my life ahead of me,
But that dosent matter any more,

Nothing matters,
I don't matter,
Who gives a hoot,

No one will ever care about me,
Do I even exist anymore,
Breathing in my worthless air,

Helping this torn body stay alive,
I don't exist,
I'm just a shadow,

A shadow,
A lost soul,
Ever searching,

Searching for a place to belong,
Floating in time and space,
A ghost of lost life,

Suicide got me,
It wasn't my time,
Trapped in eternity,

Can't escape,
Stuck in life,
Frozen in time,

The deathly shadow. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 6 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

The Deathly Shadow

Contributed by TwEeK on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:38:47 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Nobody cares,
I'll cry and cry,
But no one will come,

I'm invisible,
A chameleon,
Blending in to life,

I'm nothing,
Just useless air and space,
At one with the walls,

Same colour as the lockers,
Tears stream down my cheeks,
You walk away,

I'm no there to you,
Not to anyone,
No noe knows that I'm even alive,

If I died,
No one will know,
No one will care,

Maybe some family,
But thats all I got,
Alone and in scilence,

I'm afraid to speak,
Afraid of riticule,
To be laughed at,

I prefer to left alone,
Pay no attention to me,
Thats the way I like it,

Yes,
I would like some friends,
If I wasn't so antisocial,

I had a friend,
They used me,
Then left me to die,

Die in my own self pitty,
Alone as I've always liked it,
Curseing the world,

Slowly my blood will seep,
The murder is I,
Suicide my fatal choice,

Yea,
You may say i got my life ahead of me,
But that dosent matter any more,

Nothing matters,
I don't matter,
Who gives a hoot,

No one will ever care about me,
Do I even exist anymore,
Breathing in my worthless air,

Helping this torn body stay alive,
I don't exist,
I'm just a shadow,

A shadow,
A lost soul,
Ever searching,

Searching for a place to belong,
Floating in time and space,
A ghost of lost life,

Suicide got me,
It wasn't my time,
Trapped in eternity,

Can't escape,
Stuck in life,
Frozen in time,

The deathly shadow.

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-04-09 22:38:47]
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Re: The Deathly Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by jamsters on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 11:20:53 PM AEST
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dont do it! dont kill your self. you dont know how many people actually cares for u. even the people that spread rumors, laugh, and critisize u, the care about you. you just dont know it. if you died tommorw, so much grief would be put upon your peers. youre family would be in pity. a darkness would follow you in the after life in hell if u kill yourself. tough it out and believe in god and you will make it into heaven, where everybody is treated equal. who gives a crap how your peers see you, the only thing you should worry about is how god sees you.
P.S.
if you need a friend
im here i know what its like to be the butt of every joke, but i changed my self and became a prep, then i changed myself again because i liked myself better when i was me.
if this made any sense then i accomplished something in my life

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