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Array ( [sid] => 42524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Kitchen Suicide [time] => 2004-04-09 20:53:22 [hometext] => Just imagining things... not gonna happen... [bodytext] => Agonizing pain and horrible frustration
fog my mind,
making it impossible to think.
I've screwed things up so bad,
there's no answer but this one.
I lie on the kitchen floor,
drenched in sweat and tears.
This world gave me more than
I could take.
I know that I am weak...
My mind spins out of control,
waves of emotions
consume me.
I take the knife that
rests on the shelf.
I look at its shine,
hypnotizing and beautiful.
I slit my wrists,
bare to the bone.
There's no way I can mess up
this time...
I slit and slit until
the world gets fuzzy.
All I can see is all the
blood and the tears that
mix on the floor.
All the horrific
emotions and memories are
coming back to me.
But only for a fleeting second,
as I pass into the next world. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 36 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

A Kitchen Suicide

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:53:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Agonizing pain and horrible frustration
fog my mind,
making it impossible to think.
I've screwed things up so bad,
there's no answer but this one.
I lie on the kitchen floor,
drenched in sweat and tears.
This world gave me more than
I could take.
I know that I am weak...
My mind spins out of control,
waves of emotions
consume me.
I take the knife that
rests on the shelf.
I look at its shine,
hypnotizing and beautiful.
I slit my wrists,
bare to the bone.
There's no way I can mess up
this time...
I slit and slit until
the world gets fuzzy.
All I can see is all the
blood and the tears that
mix on the floor.
All the horrific
emotions and memories are
coming back to me.
But only for a fleeting second,
as I pass into the next world.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-04-09 20:53:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Kitchen Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:30:35 PM AEST
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very emotional and dark
Luved it a lot!
I could really picture what u were saying
Great write
*XXoXXoXXo*

Re: A Kitchen Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:45:31 AM AEST
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What a horrible scene...well written....Glad it's not gonna happen.
Jenni

Re: A Kitchen Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:53:23 PM AEST
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echo first comments
another amazing write,
tweeky

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