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Array ( [sid] => 42496 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The time I cry [time] => 2004-04-09 16:39:40 [hometext] => This poem is dedicated to anyone who knows who I feel right now [bodytext] => Sometimes I wonder why I'm alive,
And how my fears won't pass me by,
I cry when I can't have faith in myself,
Asking my soul to release my inner self

I was born into this world as a sinner,
If I ever lose I'm still a winner,
Take a good look at me sometimes,
You will find out why

I have pain in my heart,
Can't play the part,
Of a person I'm not,
There are alot

Of things people just don't understand about me,
Can't even walk or breathe,
Without someone judging me,
Because I am just me

This world is full of hate,
Something we can't replace,
So ask yourself the question"Do you wan't to live or die?",
Cause our world is in everyone's eyes [comments] => 7 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 65 [informant] => luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

The time I cry

Contributed by luckycharm on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:39:40 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Sometimes I wonder why I'm alive,
And how my fears won't pass me by,
I cry when I can't have faith in myself,
Asking my soul to release my inner self

I was born into this world as a sinner,
If I ever lose I'm still a winner,
Take a good look at me sometimes,
You will find out why

I have pain in my heart,
Can't play the part,
Of a person I'm not,
There are alot

Of things people just don't understand about me,
Can't even walk or breathe,
Without someone judging me,
Because I am just me

This world is full of hate,
Something we can't replace,
So ask yourself the question"Do you wan't to live or die?",
Cause our world is in everyone's eyes

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-04-09 16:39:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The time I cry (User Rating: 1 )
by morelikelyrics on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:20:01 PM AEST
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I agree with Happiness,

very moving and eye-opening,

great job with this one, keep it up...

~let life be your lyrical song, everyday's the words, every year is a verse, because in the end, there is no 'repeat'~
-Morelikelyrics

Re: The time I cry (User Rating: 1 )
by face-in-the-crowd on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:32:38 PM AEST
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Great write! This is one even I can relate to. Trust me, you're not the only one that feels this way.

Re: The time I cry (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:20:19 PM AEST
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I can relate to this.. a bitter yet well written poem.. good stuff :)
charlotte x_x_x

Re: The time I cry (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:36:59 PM AEST
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That was very well written and i feel for you in this if it is truely how you are feeling. Your poem is inspiring to me, sad but well done.

Silent

Re: The time I cry (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:43:31 AM AEST
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lucky i feel your sadness there has been many a time ive asked myself that question 'do you want to live or die?' and many times im not ashamed to admit ive gone for the die option, but i have stopped myself and thought of many reason's to live. this is very moving and deep. must have taken alot of courage to write this so i say thank you to you for that. well done my friend this is truely a work of art! keep writing.

love and hugs
XgenX

Re: The time I cry (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:10:20 PM AEST
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this is very sad, but absolutely beautiful. thank you for sharing your pain with us, i'm sure many of us relate very well.

Lindsey

Re: The time I cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Chilibear on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:22:09 AM AEST
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WOW! Amazing poem Pam, I absolutly loved it. It was so emotional. Keep it up.

ur #1 sis,
- Chili

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