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Array ( [sid] => 42463 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Worlds Loves [time] => 2004-04-09 10:59:26 [hometext] => This is about my love for some one whu followed everyone else an i dnt want to follow the crowd lol i like my own thoughts no one can tell me wot to do :D [bodytext] => i want to fall all the way down
i want to move but i cnt feel the ground
the world is spinning and im being left behind
i want it to stop but its jst gettin faster
an my problems are churning inside
i want this solved
i want my body
but it hurts so much inside
my love is yearning an my eyes are blind
my senses are giding me to u
but the world doesnt want this im confused is it rite?
u seem to be the one
the lite blindin my skin
the moist life in u convinses me
im fallin down
i cnt get up
this cannot be
u are jst watchin as i drop
u must be like the others
u want me to crawl
i wnt stoop to the worlds obedience
i want my own rules
i know wots rite an wots worng
an this world is wrong..........
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Worlds Loves

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:59:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



i want to fall all the way down
i want to move but i cnt feel the ground
the world is spinning and im being left behind
i want it to stop but its jst gettin faster
an my problems are churning inside
i want this solved
i want my body
but it hurts so much inside
my love is yearning an my eyes are blind
my senses are giding me to u
but the world doesnt want this im confused is it rite?
u seem to be the one
the lite blindin my skin
the moist life in u convinses me
im fallin down
i cnt get up
this cannot be
u are jst watchin as i drop
u must be like the others
u want me to crawl
i wnt stoop to the worlds obedience
i want my own rules
i know wots rite an wots worng
an this world is wrong..........




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Re: Worlds Loves (User Rating: 1 )
by GeorgeJamesDelgado on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 11:10:05 AM AEST
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Your situation is well expressed in your poem.

Go with you gut instinct. It's usually correct.




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