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Array ( [sid] => 42459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everything is fine [time] => 2004-04-09 10:45:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Life is an endless struggle that you live alone,
Everyone you love is far away from home,
Bliss and happiness are figments of reality,
Where bleeding hearts are fantasy's,
And were all labelled under the term insanity,
From everything we do, our idiosyncrasies

So take that ***** knife and end it all,
Spread your blood all over the wall,
Throw back the gears into reverse,
And travel head first through time,
In a black one horse hearse,
Whisper to your mind that everythings fine

Life is an endless struggle that you take alone,
Better tell your folks to open their eyes
And get of the ***** phone
Better sift through the lies,
And realize that your not alone
Because the ends comming and so is the *****,
Whether or not you actually like it

End this stupified reality
And live in your insanity
Consumed by vanity
Because everything is fine [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 59 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Everything is fine

Contributed by alecfernadez on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:45:48 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Life is an endless struggle that you live alone,
Everyone you love is far away from home,
Bliss and happiness are figments of reality,
Where bleeding hearts are fantasy's,
And were all labelled under the term insanity,
From everything we do, our idiosyncrasies

So take that ***** knife and end it all,
Spread your blood all over the wall,
Throw back the gears into reverse,
And travel head first through time,
In a black one horse hearse,
Whisper to your mind that everythings fine

Life is an endless struggle that you take alone,
Better tell your folks to open their eyes
And get of the ***** phone
Better sift through the lies,
And realize that your not alone
Because the ends comming and so is the *****,
Whether or not you actually like it

End this stupified reality
And live in your insanity
Consumed by vanity
Because everything is fine

Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-04-09 10:45:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Everything is fine (User Rating: 1 )
by gothicangel on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:23:45 PM AEST
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You must be really depressed.. Things will be better.. Maybe you are a singel person.. and alone in that way.. but you are never alone as long as people are caring for you!

Re: Everything is fine (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:51:24 PM AEST
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this is really good. but stop living like this, or at least try to be better than what you are.

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