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Array ( [sid] => 42438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You've Reallly Hurt Me! [time] => 2004-04-09 05:36:58 [hometext] => Maybe i'm the problem, maybe it's all my fault. i don't know... my older sister says that it him, the he's just horrid, and if i think of him i'll be more upset. but i can't help it. [bodytext] => Now i know, you don't like me,
you've rusted my illution,
burnt my emotion,
because you kept me going!
and now i feel dropped,
from my fantasy land,
and i'm faced with solid reality!
i just feel so sad.

i thought you cared,
i hope you still do,
but i'm to twisted now,
to understand more truth!

it was your brother that told me,
and i don't think he'd lie.
i just want you to hold me,
and say it's alright...
but i know you don't like me,
i wanted it to go far!
but it hasn't, and i'm frozen,
because you're the way that you ARE!!

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 22 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

You've Reallly Hurt Me!

Contributed by deathdrop on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:36:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Now i know, you don't like me,
you've rusted my illution,
burnt my emotion,
because you kept me going!
and now i feel dropped,
from my fantasy land,
and i'm faced with solid reality!
i just feel so sad.

i thought you cared,
i hope you still do,
but i'm to twisted now,
to understand more truth!

it was your brother that told me,
and i don't think he'd lie.
i just want you to hold me,
and say it's alright...
but i know you don't like me,
i wanted it to go far!
but it hasn't, and i'm frozen,
because you're the way that you ARE!!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-04-09 05:36:58]
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Re: You've Reallly Hurt Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:56:17 AM AEST
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that was powerful a great way to let your emotions out well done.

wildejohnny.

Re: You've Reallly Hurt Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:06:08 AM AEST
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Agree's 100% with wildejohnny ..Good Way To Let Your Emotions Out...I Wished I Could But I Keep Them All Bottled Up Inside...
I Write Love Poems To Keep My Mind Off The Bad Things I Bottle Up Inside Of Me...Good Write...
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: You've Reallly Hurt Me! (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:23:16 PM AEST
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This poem is good. I know how u feel, and I know it hurts in the heart. Hang in there for me.-luckycharm.

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