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Array ( [sid] => 42382 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stages of Development [time] => 2004-04-08 19:59:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Life continues through my eyes
As I fall apart
Never noticed, little child
He goes with me
For we are the same.

The masses entwine our thoughts, forcing us to conform
The child and I are flung to the corner
Where we are tortured by our emotions
It never ends.

We are now on the verge of the barrier
Between here and there
We ponder our life
For we are the same.

The child grows to an advanced mind
Yet is shunned by the outside
We all feel alone
Yet him and I are truly alone
Nothing left to gain.

Life ends through my eyes
As the child dies
Never noticed, little child
Forgotten by the world
We die together

For we are the same. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 43 [informant] => reachingzero [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Stages of Development

Contributed by reachingzero on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:59:33 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Life continues through my eyes
As I fall apart
Never noticed, little child
He goes with me
For we are the same.

The masses entwine our thoughts, forcing us to conform
The child and I are flung to the corner
Where we are tortured by our emotions
It never ends.

We are now on the verge of the barrier
Between here and there
We ponder our life
For we are the same.

The child grows to an advanced mind
Yet is shunned by the outside
We all feel alone
Yet him and I are truly alone
Nothing left to gain.

Life ends through my eyes
As the child dies
Never noticed, little child
Forgotten by the world
We die together

For we are the same.

Copyright Â© reachingzero ... [ 2004-04-08 19:59:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stages of Development (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:42:02 AM AEST
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wow... thats all i have to say... wow. :) You have a really awesome talent RZ. I really hope to see more posts. You have become one of my favorites.

Lindsey

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