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Array ( [sid] => 42381 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Release me [time] => 2004-04-08 19:50:37 [hometext] => If u don't need me or wan't me, just release me so I can love someone else [bodytext] => My eyes are watery,
Because of the things I heard,
Come out of your mouth,
And I seem to let it,
All get to me,
And it hurts my emotions,
I look into your eyes,
And I see no tears,
Sheding down your own face,
It just kills me so bad,
You said u don't wan't my love,
So just release me

I think about how I was,
Always in your world,
But maybe I was thinking,
About that for myself,
About u,
I sit and daydream sometimes,
I even remember how u looked at me,
And I begin to feel like,
I'm gonna die,
Cause I cry on my pillow,
And my tears are a ocean,
That leads to u,
You said u don't need me,
So just release me

I wish I could see u,
Once again,
But my heart,
Can never mend,
Without u here,
To comfort me,
In my coldest nights,
Do you remember who I am?,
I was the one who loved u,
The one who trusted u,
And the one who never got u,
Out of my sight,
So if u don't really care about,
This girl that has loved u,
Just release me

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Release me

Contributed by luckycharm on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:50:37 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



My eyes are watery,
Because of the things I heard,
Come out of your mouth,
And I seem to let it,
All get to me,
And it hurts my emotions,
I look into your eyes,
And I see no tears,
Sheding down your own face,
It just kills me so bad,
You said u don't wan't my love,
So just release me

I think about how I was,
Always in your world,
But maybe I was thinking,
About that for myself,
About u,
I sit and daydream sometimes,
I even remember how u looked at me,
And I begin to feel like,
I'm gonna die,
Cause I cry on my pillow,
And my tears are a ocean,
That leads to u,
You said u don't need me,
So just release me

I wish I could see u,
Once again,
But my heart,
Can never mend,
Without u here,
To comfort me,
In my coldest nights,
Do you remember who I am?,
I was the one who loved u,
The one who trusted u,
And the one who never got u,
Out of my sight,
So if u don't really care about,
This girl that has loved u,
Just release me





Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-04-08 19:50:37]
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Re: Release me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:11:36 PM AEST
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That was filled with lots of emotion and very well writen, I liked it lots. Good job.


Re: Release me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:14:34 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes and hit me straight in my heart.

Very powerful poem.

Kie


Re: Release me (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:38:00 PM AEST
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A deep poem being trapped in your mind, very sad. I loved this one, speaks volumes of truth and written from the heart, very powerful.

Silent


Re: Release me (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:35:51 AM AEST
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I like it alot.
so well written.


Re: Release me (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:11:47 PM AEST
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Wow Pam, its scary how much I relate to this. I love your style and it flows very well. Beautiful.

Lindsey




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