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Array ( [sid] => 42366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Messages I Recieve [time] => 2004-04-08 17:35:05 [hometext] => Thoughts to be Shared ..Another Day Passes [bodytext] => Quiet.
Can you hear it.
It's Comin on the Wind
Finally , Finally ,
A Message from Him.

"How ya doin darling?
Gee ,Everythings is just Great.
Things are moving along just fine.
Sure Hoping you'll get this message
I keep on trying.
Time after Time.

I've sent so many by Song,.
Lke the ones we would lisen too
in the Good ole Days.

And Hey, I'm Workin .
And just Rollin in the Dough
Thought maybe, You wonder If I'm Lonly
But Hey, Guess What
I got a Pet Just Llike Ole' Figgeroe.

Yup Things are just Great
and I hope Yours is the Same.

I"m reminded, Everytime ,I see ,
A Rubber Band or a Butterfly,
of all the things we did and what you meant to me.
Thoughts of you Darling ,
Just come Foating in .

Gee, its getting Late now
and I guess I gotta go.
Sure is nice talking this way ,you know.

Keep yourself Strong now Darling,
and Know that though were Apart ,
I Will always
Love You just Same as Always
Deep within My Heart"

These Talks with Him,
are all Mine and Perhap ..
Not really there.

But with Every Breath I Take,
And Every Struggling Step I Make,
Is Only with You in mind.

In My Dreams Alone.
We met again and I Whisper His Name.
And with his arms wrapped securly around me
I know that I am Home.

Whisper [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Whisper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Messages I Recieve

Contributed by Whisper on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Quiet.
Can you hear it.
It's Comin on the Wind
Finally , Finally ,
A Message from Him.

"How ya doin darling?
Gee ,Everythings is just Great.
Things are moving along just fine.
Sure Hoping you'll get this message
I keep on trying.
Time after Time.

I've sent so many by Song,.
Lke the ones we would lisen too
in the Good ole Days.

And Hey, I'm Workin .
And just Rollin in the Dough
Thought maybe, You wonder If I'm Lonly
But Hey, Guess What
I got a Pet Just Llike Ole' Figgeroe.

Yup Things are just Great
and I hope Yours is the Same.

I"m reminded, Everytime ,I see ,
A Rubber Band or a Butterfly,
of all the things we did and what you meant to me.
Thoughts of you Darling ,
Just come Foating in .

Gee, its getting Late now
and I guess I gotta go.
Sure is nice talking this way ,you know.

Keep yourself Strong now Darling,
and Know that though were Apart ,
I Will always
Love You just Same as Always
Deep within My Heart"

These Talks with Him,
are all Mine and Perhap ..
Not really there.

But with Every Breath I Take,
And Every Struggling Step I Make,
Is Only with You in mind.

In My Dreams Alone.
We met again and I Whisper His Name.
And with his arms wrapped securly around me
I know that I am Home.

Whisper

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2004-04-08 17:35:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Messages I Recieve (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:39:48 PM AEST
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Sometimes the heart makes real the desires we seek.

Nice write...

Re: Messages I Recieve (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:15:19 PM AEST
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I love the wistful hope in this one.
Keep strong.
Andrew

Re: Messages I Recieve (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:05:23 AM AEST
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This is a very poignant piece. I hear the futility here but yet a strong sense of hope pushing it aside. I hope all works for you two. This left me with a sense of someone that never accepts defeat. That, my dear, is a good thing.

rainbows,
Rita

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