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They were disgusted by what they saw
You judge me based on my sexuality
I cant believe this is reality
Before you judge me
Why don’t you look at yourself

You think your so great
But your not cause you hate
You all just hate me
None of you can even see
I don’t want to lie to you
I needed you to know who I am

Its not like anyone would care if I died
Im just a dyke a sick and nasty freak
That’s what you say to me
But cant you see
The pain this cause’s me

Like he said in his song:

“seeing it, breathing,
all the hate and denial
lied to again, left out
feeling hollow and broken”

For me those words are true,
All because of you
You wont be satisfied
Until I’m classified
A sadistic
Statistic
Of suicide.
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Friends

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:47:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

They weren’t really my friends at all
They were disgusted by what they saw
You judge me based on my sexuality
I cant believe this is reality
Before you judge me
Why don’t you look at yourself

You think your so great
But your not cause you hate
You all just hate me
None of you can even see
I don’t want to lie to you
I needed you to know who I am

Its not like anyone would care if I died
Im just a dyke a sick and nasty freak
That’s what you say to me
But cant you see
The pain this cause’s me

Like he said in his song:

“seeing it, breathing,
all the hate and denial
lied to again, left out
feeling hollow and broken”

For me those words are true,
All because of you
You wont be satisfied
Until I’m classified
A sadistic
Statistic
Of suicide.

Copyright Â© willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-04-08 13:47:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by Arius-Inues on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:57:43 PM AEST
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Very well written and its true. peopl love to put ppl down because of sexuality, religion or looks. I'm here if you need to talk (and you dont need to worie I dont juge.)

Re: Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:33:51 PM AEST
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welldone, i know how u feel sadly. good work and kep it up

woei queen

Re: Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by kissez_x0x0_hugz on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:12:43 PM AEST
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This is a Great Poem for letting ppl know to be comfortable about their sexuality....Don't listen to what other ppl say just do what you feel is proper! And if you need anybody to tlk to im goin to be hear..Don't worry i dont judge anybody by looks, skills, religion, race, sexuality or anything like that...unless they are annoyin lol well i doubt that you are..k great write tho loved it it commits your self to your perspective on life!
-Candice x0x0

Re: Friends (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:25:59 PM AEST
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i really like the way u write its very true, people can be cruel and hurtfull but as long as ur being yourself who cares what others think...............great write keep it up
**vampirchick**

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