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Array ( [sid] => 42302 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your World [time] => 2004-04-08 08:17:32 [hometext] => In memory of a beloved who is not here anymore [bodytext] => I quench the sun
Her golden heart
Just burns too much

I gag the clouds
Their velvet tears
Just bite too much

I blind the sky
His azure shine
Just hurts too much

Why must the grass
Intoxicate me
With emerald green
That edges my soul

It makes me cry
Feel me slowly drown
It makes me fly
From what I am now


Why must the snow
Invade me with pain
Immaculate white
To choke my haven

It makes me weep
Dark oceans of fear
It makes me sleep
In deadly defeat


When I see you
It is just a glimpse
Of a longlost dream

When I hear you
It is just an echo
Of an ancient myth

When I feel you
It is a breeze
That tickles my tomb

My heart
I locked it in
And lost
The key
My soul
I buried it
In evaporated
Memories


When the sun burns
The clouds cry
The sky sings
The gras swings
The snow throws
Its cover on me

Then I see you
You surf the sunbeams
Then I hear you
You whisper in the rain
Then I feel you
You chase the wind

You embrace me
As I lie in the grass
You caress me
As I touch the snow
You melt on my face
You melt in my hands

This memory slips
But still is


Hold me
Once again
Hold me
In your world
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 27 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Your World

Contributed by Hurretje on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:17:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I quench the sun
Her golden heart
Just burns too much

I gag the clouds
Their velvet tears
Just bite too much

I blind the sky
His azure shine
Just hurts too much

Why must the grass
Intoxicate me
With emerald green
That edges my soul

It makes me cry
Feel me slowly drown
It makes me fly
From what I am now


Why must the snow
Invade me with pain
Immaculate white
To choke my haven

It makes me weep
Dark oceans of fear
It makes me sleep
In deadly defeat


When I see you
It is just a glimpse
Of a longlost dream

When I hear you
It is just an echo
Of an ancient myth

When I feel you
It is a breeze
That tickles my tomb

My heart
I locked it in
And lost
The key
My soul
I buried it
In evaporated
Memories


When the sun burns
The clouds cry
The sky sings
The gras swings
The snow throws
Its cover on me

Then I see you
You surf the sunbeams
Then I hear you
You whisper in the rain
Then I feel you
You chase the wind

You embrace me
As I lie in the grass
You caress me
As I touch the snow
You melt on my face
You melt in my hands

This memory slips
But still is


Hold me
Once again
Hold me
In your world




Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-04-08 08:17:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Your World (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:31:04 AM AEST
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This is one of the best poems i have ever read. It brings forth so much sadness and contemplation, it was written so astonishingly well. I am amazed, i am going to bookmark this as in my mind you have written the perfect poem, if any write was going to make me feel tears it is this one. You have an incredible gift of words, this one was truly amazing, thank you so much for writing and sharing it.

That was so beautiful,

Silent *now i am in awe of you, wow* there are not enough stars for me for this poem.


Re: Your World (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:36:59 AM AEST
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.......I'm at a loss for words. That just radiates emotion and went straight to my heart. You rock.


Re: Your World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:24:12 AM AEST
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An absolutely stunning piece.

wildejohnny.


Re: Your World (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:56:28 AM AEST
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Oh This Is Just Beautiful :-) Very Sensational Poem...Loved It ..
.Keep Em Coming Very Enjoyable Read....
********LoVe***AnGeL********
********************************


Re: Your World (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:56:25 PM AEST
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This poem reeks of pain, heart tearing so sad! *wiping tears* You reached my heart with this poem! Awesome write!
Anne :D


Re: Your World (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:05:31 PM AEST
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this is an incredible write... such strong words make me feel the pain of the loss you went thru ... im sorry for you loss i know nothing will ever replace him/her... but at least you have fond memories to hold onto :)


Re: Your World (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:00:07 AM AEST
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What an emotional write. I am so sorry for your loss. Very beautiful dedication. This was sad, yet beautiful. *S* Cynthia




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