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Provided we are carefully aware
Not to slide into something comfortable
Resistance is weak at any given moment
Wanting fills every other breath
Breaking down believers
Turn spring into summer
Lethargic dreamers
Casting shadows before us
Like tentacles of despair
They have seen us before
Heard the whispers grow louder
Slaking our lust for excitement
Inevitably we are lost again and again
In greener pastures of plenty
Where we smell our next meal
Surely a banquet awaits us
Moving closer by degrees
Occasionally see each other
Through blood-thirsty eyes
Not willing to risk it, we are two of a kind [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 16 [informant] => merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

two of a kind

Contributed by merry on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:54:04 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Nothing lost in the details
Provided we are carefully aware
Not to slide into something comfortable
Resistance is weak at any given moment
Wanting fills every other breath
Breaking down believers
Turn spring into summer
Lethargic dreamers
Casting shadows before us
Like tentacles of despair
They have seen us before
Heard the whispers grow louder
Slaking our lust for excitement
Inevitably we are lost again and again
In greener pastures of plenty
Where we smell our next meal
Surely a banquet awaits us
Moving closer by degrees
Occasionally see each other
Through blood-thirsty eyes
Not willing to risk it, we are two of a kind

Copyright © merry ... [ 2004-04-08 07:54:04]
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Re: two of a kind (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:59:00 AM AEST
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Mmmmm. The uniting of souls---seeing your own reflection in your lover's eyes. You always describe these things so well.
Stitch

Re: two of a kind (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:25:24 AM AEST
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Occasionally see each other
Through blood-thirsty eyes
Not willing to risk it, we are two of a kind.....

I get the distinct impression you are talking about.......naw...couldnt be.

Roses ;o)

Larry

Re: two of a kind (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:54:22 PM AEST
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Awesome piece of poetry! Very vivid imagery! Enjoyed reading it! Skilled writing!
Anne :D

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