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Array ( [sid] => 42253 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => honey blonde [time] => 2004-04-07 23:27:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => look at the blood
it's every where
she was such a beautiful girl
with honey blonde hair

her eyes were vibrant,
so alive
now she's past hope
no use in trying to revive

never a foul word
nothing vulgor to say
she was so young
with so many more days

on the mirrow
smirred in red lip stick
a message to herself
"i hate you *****"

she was a wonderful person
never the kind to fight
but she slashed her wrists
to "save my life tonight"

every girl wanted to be her
she was the on the chearleading team
she was daddy's little girl
soon to be the prom queen

but intead she lay on her bathroom floor
hand still clutching the razor blade
her life is over
the memory fades [comments] => 3 [counter] => 353 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PoOkSiE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

honey blonde

Contributed by PoOkSiE on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:27:28 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

look at the blood
it's every where
she was such a beautiful girl
with honey blonde hair

her eyes were vibrant,
so alive
now she's past hope
no use in trying to revive

never a foul word
nothing vulgor to say
she was so young
with so many more days

on the mirrow
smirred in red lip stick
a message to herself
"i hate you *****"

she was a wonderful person
never the kind to fight
but she slashed her wrists
to "save my life tonight"

every girl wanted to be her
she was the on the chearleading team
she was daddy's little girl
soon to be the prom queen

but intead she lay on her bathroom floor
hand still clutching the razor blade
her life is over
the memory fades

Copyright © PoOkSiE ... [ 2004-04-07 23:27:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: honey blonde (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:49:32 AM AEST
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Tragic... so much life ahead... It's sad but true that this very thing happens somewhere in the world each day...
This poem spoke to my heart... saying to love all the ppl u care about more... so this kind of tragedy never happens... epecially the teenagers in ur life...
A great poem... keep writing...
~Donna~

Re: honey blonde (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:37:35 PM AEST
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What a sad dark poem! Written very well!
Anne

Re: honey blonde (User Rating: 1 )
by silentrain07 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:00:52 PM AEST
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aw thats so sad....she had so much left but she gave it all away... that was a great write! -katie

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