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[aid] => mick
[title] => Fate's Reminder
[time] => 2004-04-07 16:25:56
[hometext] => I wrote this poem to actually summarize a major series of events that happened to me over the course of about 7 months. These events are the single most important things that have ever happened to me :)
[bodytext] => My life was normal my life was fine Nothing exciting and no need to whine I went through school without much pain Concequently I had little gain My life was boring, I was smart but shy Something told me I was living a lie My life was guided, controlled, constrained My mother commanded me, my grades should not wane My behavior must be perfect, my future must be great This life it sucked, it oh so much I hate On and on I went through time Saying little back as if a mime Till fate decided to teach me a lesson I was so confused, it kept me guessin I met this person, a most beautiful girl I was so infatuated, my mind went a whirl I loved her so much, she made me happy My life was perfect, was anything but crapy Like a bomb in my face, she left me for good But it was destined to happen, I kinda knew it would My life went to hell, I was floating in crap I was depressed for months, blood flowed from my tap It took my a while to realize why Someone looked out for me, released me from the lie I learned alot from pain and depression To hear what I went through would be at your disgression The scare of defeat will never be gone The good thing though, my new life has just dawned Im happier now, my life is anew Do I believe in fate, I most certainly do And I hate to say this about that wonderful girl She was a tool of fate's will, what a rare pearl She was majorly important to the life I now live A life of knowledge to me she now gives So to fate I say thank you, to her I say wow Is there anything I can do for her? my help begins now [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Arrundel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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