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Feel my wrath as you decay

I chew you up like nightmares
rage

I spit you out
with scars and blisters

You always turn in fear
wondering if my inner demon is right there

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Inner Demon

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:03:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Drag you down to hell with me
Feel my wrath as you decay

I chew you up like nightmares
rage

I spit you out
with scars and blisters

You always turn in fear
wondering if my inner demon is right there

JENNA

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2004-04-07 14:03:16]
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Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:05:51 PM AEST
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wow, this is such an angry write, that yet again I can relate to, you must be psyic lol!
I enjoyed it, and the anger was released in such away that it hyptonises the reader

Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:13:42 PM AEST
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wow, really spits at you. i like this, and i agree i think everyone can relate to this. *hugs* phil

Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:57:35 PM AEST
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You do write with alot of anger. I like the bit about chew you up like nightmares rage. I like how it sounded. It reminded me of a line from a movie... You know what I mean.

Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:26:31 PM AEST
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WoW This shows alot of anger ...I liked it..good write...
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:30:59 PM AEST
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'Feel my wrath as you decay'
That was a dope line I loved this short poem that was burning with anger... Absolutely beautiful.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:45:17 PM AEST
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HA HA short and to the ponit.

Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 01:38:45 PM AEST
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Oh i loved this. Short and to the point. Not a lot wrote but a lot said and good imagery. I really enjoyed this.
Very well done.
Glad to have you back :)
5 stars
Arden

Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by avanottingham on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:50:25 AM AEST
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This has got to be one of my favorites from you!

Re: Inner Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:08:54 AM AEST
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Woah kinda scary I was pulled in! Great write :-)

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