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Array ( [sid] => 42177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alex is dead [time] => 2004-04-07 14:02:56 [hometext] => ... [bodytext] => Lie back onto your bed of red roses,
Close those glazed eyes to the world,
Manipulate your paralysed limbs into poses,
That suggest you impending doom

I guess It would be better,
If I wrote happy things,
But lifes to short,
And so is youth
When its taken away from you
I guess I could laugh,
But I'm just a deer-
Caught in the headlights

Clasp your hands around the knife,
That eventually took your life,
Bloody your last suit,
Send pieces to everyone

I guess It would be better,
If I wrote happy things,
But lifes to short,
And so is youth
When its taken away from you
I guess I could laugh,
But I'm just a deer-
caught in the headlights

Dream away the day has gone,
The last day you'll ever live,
Because now your last deed is done,
And how could they ever forgive

Know it now,
Life just passes away
Know it now,
This is just the begining
Of the end
Because
Alex is dead [comments] => 9 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 52 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Alex is dead

Contributed by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:02:56 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Lie back onto your bed of red roses,
Close those glazed eyes to the world,
Manipulate your paralysed limbs into poses,
That suggest you impending doom

I guess It would be better,
If I wrote happy things,
But lifes to short,
And so is youth
When its taken away from you
I guess I could laugh,
But I'm just a deer-
Caught in the headlights

Clasp your hands around the knife,
That eventually took your life,
Bloody your last suit,
Send pieces to everyone

I guess It would be better,
If I wrote happy things,
But lifes to short,
And so is youth
When its taken away from you
I guess I could laugh,
But I'm just a deer-
caught in the headlights

Dream away the day has gone,
The last day you'll ever live,
Because now your last deed is done,
And how could they ever forgive

Know it now,
Life just passes away
Know it now,
This is just the begining
Of the end
Because
Alex is dead

Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-04-07 14:02:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:10:27 PM AEST
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wow this poem is good.. it has a nice flow to it.. its true that childhood flies by and some of us don't get to enjoy it cuz of bad lives.. awesome write

peace and hope
JENNA

Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:22:28 PM AEST
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wow, this is brilliant, really good. i love the flow, and everything. amazing write. *hugs* phil xxx

Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:35:09 PM AEST
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so sad, yet poetic to the last... it was beautiful in its own special way.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:28:52 PM AEST
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This Was Sad-although it had alot of flow to it...I liked it...Great write...
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,

Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:15:29 PM AEST
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alec, this is soooo sad, but a true poetic genious. Please keep writing, you have such a talent.

Lindsey

Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:06:57 PM AEST
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Hmmm interesting write. Sorry about Alex.

Whisper

Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:00:21 AM AEST
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Wow, brilliant rhythm there, every verse flows neatly from one to the next and it's very sad in a beautiful poetic way. Well done.

Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:10:33 AM AEST
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very well put. i love it.

Re: Alex is dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:05:55 PM AEST
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Such a sad poem. I can feel your emotions in this write. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia

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