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Array ( [sid] => 42163 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SickSway [time] => 2004-04-07 12:06:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => take me under the soil
so i can see inside your heart
within all the darkness and turmoil
and why you believe you can never start
my mind is burning away and on fire like a cigarette
poisoned with chemicals that don't even belong there
haunted with past memories of when we first met
such beautiful skin, and a person so rare
hear what i say.......don't you think i'm right
is that why you want to take me home tonight
but forget the consequences and forget what your saying
you make me sick, my emotions continue swaying
causing my mind to spin out of control
falling into this never ending hole
there is no way in this hell i could ever crawl out
in my mind there is no doubt
that if i seen you again, i would surely die
and would anyone care....... sicksway [comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 48 [informant] => valek [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

SickSway

Contributed by valek on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:06:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

take me under the soil
so i can see inside your heart
within all the darkness and turmoil
and why you believe you can never start
my mind is burning away and on fire like a cigarette
poisoned with chemicals that don't even belong there
haunted with past memories of when we first met
such beautiful skin, and a person so rare
hear what i say.......don't you think i'm right
is that why you want to take me home tonight
but forget the consequences and forget what your saying
you make me sick, my emotions continue swaying
causing my mind to spin out of control
falling into this never ending hole
there is no way in this hell i could ever crawl out
in my mind there is no doubt
that if i seen you again, i would surely die
and would anyone care....... sicksway

Copyright © valek ... [ 2004-04-07 12:06:15]
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Re: SickSway (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:26:36 PM AEST
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wow this is very deep. i like it so much seems a little dark but nonetheless it is a fantastic poem. :)

love and hugs
XgenX

Re: SickSway (User Rating: 1 )
by angrycheerios on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:17:10 PM AEST
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i really like this. its moving

Re: SickSway (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:29:31 PM AEST
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a very good thoughtful poem excellent title too!

wildejohnny

Re: SickSway (User Rating: 1 )
by ICEYFLAMES on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:45:18 PM AEST
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Oh man this is a very very great poem... i got engulphed into it... You have an awesome way w/ words zac... can wait to read more.. RIght on

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