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[sid] => 42152
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Abuse of the Mind
[time] => 2004-04-07 10:17:33
[hometext] => Fairly deep little poem i think, last line intertwines with the first two in a bit of a complex way. Appreciate thoughts bad or good
[bodytext] =>
You abuse me, yet I am innocent
You condemn me, yet I am free
Throw away the lock, and lock away the key
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 248
[topic] => 13
[informant] => silent
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[score] => 19
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => DarkPoetry
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Abuse of the Mind
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silent
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:17:33 AM in AEST
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You abuse me, yet I am innocent
You condemn me, yet I am free
Throw away the lock, and lock away the key
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-07 10:17:33]
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Re: Abuse of the Mind
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:27:09 AM AEST
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Makes me think of my relationship with my Dad. You can't get away and yet you hate staying and being abused. The escape was really within myself. Guess I swallowed the key. This is good and very thought provoking. I like the way you write and think.
Stitch |
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Re: Abuse of the Mind
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:04:19 AM AEST
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Oh, you're right, it's awesome =)
That last line is great. And all the words have their place.
Another good write with no wasted breath =)
(or INK is should say..... or screen space..... oh, I'll shut up lol)
A fabulous write-- keep it up!
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Abuse of the Mind
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by arden on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:23:31 PM AEST
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Throw away the lock, and lock away the key,
that was friggin awesome! this poem was kinda creepy and just so cool. loved this even though its rather short. dark and chilling. love it.
Arden
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Re: Abuse of the Mind
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:02:21 PM AEST
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| i love this, its amazing how many messages comeout in thos few lines. great write *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Abuse of the Mind
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:16:07 PM AEST
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wow I really like this .. these few lines say alot.. I can understand this feeling and can very well relate.. awesome job!
peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Abuse of the Mind
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:14:15 AM AEST
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| I love how you're able to pack so much volume and meaning into just a few lines. *bows before you* |
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Re: Abuse of the Mind
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:58:02 PM AEST
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The magnitude of this poem tugs at my insides. I am in awe of your talent. This is outstanding. This is amazing. this is beautiful. This is perfect.
Lindsey |
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Re: Abuse of the Mind
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:00:34 AM AEST
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| This poem was so awsome!! |
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