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Lingering elegant raven black hair
Eyes the color of melancholy sapphires
Mesmerized, all he can do is stare.

She saunters into the room gradually
Each footstep taken with poise
Above all the commotion-and hullabaloo
His heartbeat is all he hears, no noise.

She smiles and his legs quake
She speaks and it pierces his soul
He is enthralled by her beauty
Before he recognizes it- she becomes his goal.

He reaches for her hand- “Shall we dance?”
She strolls perfectly into his arms
Her body and his- a flawless fit
He enchants her with his charms.

Embracing each other tightly
And peering expectantly into each others core
They lean in for the forever-anticipated kiss
And- He wakes up pleading for more.
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A Figment of the Imagination

Contributed by strange_lindsey on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:23:56 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

In the form of an angel he envisions her
Lingering elegant raven black hair
Eyes the color of melancholy sapphires
Mesmerized, all he can do is stare.

She saunters into the room gradually
Each footstep taken with poise
Above all the commotion-and hullabaloo
His heartbeat is all he hears, no noise.

She smiles and his legs quake
She speaks and it pierces his soul
He is enthralled by her beauty
Before he recognizes it- she becomes his goal.

He reaches for her hand- “Shall we dance?”
She strolls perfectly into his arms
Her body and his- a flawless fit
He enchants her with his charms.

Embracing each other tightly
And peering expectantly into each others core
They lean in for the forever-anticipated kiss
And- He wakes up pleading for more.

Copyright Â© strange_lindsey ... [ 2004-04-07 05:23:56]
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Re: A Figment of the Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:39:01 AM AEST
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i loved this poem...it's beautiful

Re: A Figment of the Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:07:16 AM AEST
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A very enchanting reverie you have painted here...I can see her, almost as an angelic ballerina in pirouette; sharing the dance of a lifetime, and the feeling of newly ignited love. Breathtaking poem Lindsey.

Truly,
-Dan

Re: A Figment of the Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:47:03 AM AEST
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oh oh oh i loved this!!
just so beautiful and wow. great job its perfect. keep it up.
Arden

Re: A Figment of the Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:30:58 PM AEST
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This is like one of those perfect love stories, its told in such a way that it makes a really really good story that you can get into

Re: A Figment of the Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:51:54 PM AEST
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i have a lot of dreams like this! a really good poem very well written.

wildejohnny.

Re: A Figment of the Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:35:58 AM AEST
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and he awaits sleep, and the return to that elegance of her dance, and the soft gentle smile of her soul.

another night saved from dreamless sleep, thank you.

Re: A Figment of the Imagination (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:08:24 AM AEST
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The dreamer must return to this dream, over and over and never end.

beautiful dream, thanks for sharing.

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