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Array ( [sid] => 42127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => While You Were Sleeping [time] => 2004-04-07 03:25:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sometimes when you're sleeping
I'll watch you as you're dreaming
wondering where your dreams take you
hoping you're having beautiful dreams

And I gently brush your brow
wondering if you could possibly fathom
the depth of my love
that measures beyond mere words

Never in my wildest dreams
had I imagined that I would be
in the arms of such a loving soul
that completes me

In your peacefully sound sleep
I gently kiss your beautiful warm lips
trying not to disturb
your dream world

And silently thank heaven above
for giving me such a love
that not only fulfills me
but makes me the woman I want to be ... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 2 [informant] => teejay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

While You Were Sleeping

Contributed by teejay on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:25:40 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Sometimes when you're sleeping
I'll watch you as you're dreaming
wondering where your dreams take you
hoping you're having beautiful dreams

And I gently brush your brow
wondering if you could possibly fathom
the depth of my love
that measures beyond mere words

Never in my wildest dreams
had I imagined that I would be
in the arms of such a loving soul
that completes me

In your peacefully sound sleep
I gently kiss your beautiful warm lips
trying not to disturb
your dream world

And silently thank heaven above
for giving me such a love
that not only fulfills me
but makes me the woman I want to be ...

Copyright © teejay ... [ 2004-04-07 03:25:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: While You Were Sleeping (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:53:12 AM AEST
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Very good poem. Seems like u really like dis guy.... Hope it stays the way it is.

Dizza

Re: While You Were Sleeping (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:45:17 AM AEST
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i can totally relate...feel exactly the same about someone...it's a great feeling

Re: While You Were Sleeping (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:13:51 PM AEST
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Oh My Tee Jay...........this was exquisite.......how delightfully romantic can you get.........you have so much love in heart....and it beams through in your poems in every part!
You are truly talented, dear Tiana......and I'm so glad we meet........Welcome to YPDC....you'll be loved her alot right from the very start! And you will always be very happy!
Your lover, husband whatever......one lucky man is he!
love
consue
lovingcrtters

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