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Array ( [sid] => 42123 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Give in the the feelings [time] => 2004-04-07 02:47:19 [hometext] => We have been friends for some time but we both know we have something no one could take from us. We are just scared and nervous to relize it because I don't know why please tell me what you think [bodytext] => We have been close friends
for about a year or two
But there is something bold
that we both must do

I know the way you trust
And how you feel for me
With those deep eye to eye looks
It’s not hard for me to see

The way you look at me
takes my breath away
I can not explain the feeling
to this very day

So don’t be utterly afraid
to let your feelings show
I feel the same confusion also
just to let you know

It’s hard to even imagine
of what this could only mean
We’ve always been the best of friends
or so it has been seen

But when we are all alone
off into our separate world
We open up our suppressed hearts
leaving us uncurled

We both now hide the feel
Of this tender power
Thinking longingly about each other
With each waking hour

The feel of your gentle hands
Touching every part of me
Gives me sweet little chills all over
I know you feel the energy

The soft lips on your face
Have me drifting away
Into beautiful picture perfect dreams
Indescribable in every way

Or hands fit flawlessly as one
Tenderly and gently placed
To create an exact magnificent creation
So affectionately embraced

When will we both give in
To the uncontrollable feeling
That is always throbbing in our hearts
When will be the revealing
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MaRyDoNtUwaNnA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Give in the the feelings

Contributed by MaRyDoNtUwaNnA on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:47:19 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



We have been close friends
for about a year or two
But there is something bold
that we both must do

I know the way you trust
And how you feel for me
With those deep eye to eye looks
It’s not hard for me to see

The way you look at me
takes my breath away
I can not explain the feeling
to this very day

So don’t be utterly afraid
to let your feelings show
I feel the same confusion also
just to let you know

It’s hard to even imagine
of what this could only mean
We’ve always been the best of friends
or so it has been seen

But when we are all alone
off into our separate world
We open up our suppressed hearts
leaving us uncurled

We both now hide the feel
Of this tender power
Thinking longingly about each other
With each waking hour

The feel of your gentle hands
Touching every part of me
Gives me sweet little chills all over
I know you feel the energy

The soft lips on your face
Have me drifting away
Into beautiful picture perfect dreams
Indescribable in every way

Or hands fit flawlessly as one
Tenderly and gently placed
To create an exact magnificent creation
So affectionately embraced

When will we both give in
To the uncontrollable feeling
That is always throbbing in our hearts
When will be the revealing




Copyright © MaRyDoNtUwaNnA ... [ 2004-04-07 02:47:19]
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Re: Give in the the feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:05:23 AM AEST
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Brilliant! I hope u can both take the step soon.

Dizza


Re: Give in the the feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Vickie on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 02:11:29 AM AEST
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wow! great write!! i remember having those feelings...i think you should go for it!! good luck!




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