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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => GIRLFRIENDS
[time] => 2004-04-07 02:30:01
[hometext] => To have a precious girlfriend would mean so much!
[bodytext] => 
'GIRLFRIENDS"
Skating while singing a song.
My Girl friend and I glide along.
We love to skate together, we are four.
Girl friends since three or more!
She loves bonnets, I love hats.
Puppies she loves, my favorite are cats!
Flowers for her are roses, Mine are Lilacs...
She loves pink, I love blue, same frocks!
We're girlfriends, love each other a lot.
What she remembered, I forgot
Without asking, she knew my very thought!
What she didn't know I taught!
Hand in hand the first day of school
Tightly connected, one module.
When she cried, I did too, shoulder to shoulder.
Arm in arm strength to bolster!
Dreams of things we knew were far-fetched!
Hearts and mind finely sketched
First nylons, first high heel practice.
Giggling, tottering, falling, graceless!
First boyfriend, nothing not shared!
Overnight slumber parties, always compared.
First kiss, promises of future days
Always advising, no decisions, n'er without OK's!
Shared our beautiful weddings together
Side by side, down the same isle, same altar.
Closer than twin sisters, husband's agree
Separate honeymoon's, missed each other tremendously!
Same city, just blocks away
Called first thing each morning, start of day.
Compared our pregnancies, bulky pictures.
During labors each other's anchors!
Babysitters for one another always
Husbands closer than brothers, good blenders.
Children raised side by side most times!
Cheered for each our whole lifetimes.
Buried and consoled, each husband gone.
Our heart's love closer 'twas drawn.
The same prayer we each utter sincerely....
"Give me the strength to bury my precious
girlfriend, whom I love most dearly!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
April 6, 2004
"Girlfriend Smiles"
"A friend is someone who knows the song
in your heart and can sing it back to you,
when you have forgotten the words!
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 332
[topic] => 21
[informant] => lovingcritters
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 19
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
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GIRLFRIENDS
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:30:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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'GIRLFRIENDS"
Skating while singing a song.
My Girl friend and I glide along.
We love to skate together, we are four.
Girl friends since three or more!
She loves bonnets, I love hats.
Puppies she loves, my favorite are cats!
Flowers for her are roses, Mine are Lilacs...
She loves pink, I love blue, same frocks!
We're girlfriends, love each other a lot.
What she remembered, I forgot
Without asking, she knew my very thought!
What she didn't know I taught!
Hand in hand the first day of school
Tightly connected, one module.
When she cried, I did too, shoulder to shoulder.
Arm in arm strength to bolster!
Dreams of things we knew were far-fetched!
Hearts and mind finely sketched
First nylons, first high heel practice.
Giggling, tottering, falling, graceless!
First boyfriend, nothing not shared!
Overnight slumber parties, always compared.
First kiss, promises of future days
Always advising, no decisions, n'er without OK's!
Shared our beautiful weddings together
Side by side, down the same isle, same altar.
Closer than twin sisters, husband's agree
Separate honeymoon's, missed each other tremendously!
Same city, just blocks away
Called first thing each morning, start of day.
Compared our pregnancies, bulky pictures.
During labors each other's anchors!
Babysitters for one another always
Husbands closer than brothers, good blenders.
Children raised side by side most times!
Cheered for each our whole lifetimes.
Buried and consoled, each husband gone.
Our heart's love closer 'twas drawn.
The same prayer we each utter sincerely....
"Give me the strength to bury my precious
girlfriend, whom I love most dearly!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
April 6, 2004
"Girlfriend Smiles"
"A friend is someone who knows the song
in your heart and can sing it back to you,
when you have forgotten the words!
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2004-04-07 02:30:01]
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:36:20 AM AEST
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| Awww, that was so cute, lovely and cheery all rolled into one! I loved the pictures they are adorable....and I agree that friends are so precious :) |
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:02:16 AM AEST
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this made me cry this is so precious
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:24:47 AM AEST
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nice write! you should be writing childrens books though!
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by TeeJay on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:42:39 AM AEST
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| This beautiful poem that brought tears to my eyes. You've captured the true meaning of friendship. My best friends are two sisters whom I love as my own sisters. And we share everything from secrets to clothes too. lol Thank you for this beautiful poem. May you and your friend always have each other, sharing a lifetime of happiness ... |
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:14:36 AM AEST
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| What delightful pictures and the poem is after my own heart. Friendship at this tender age is really friendship. thanks from bern |
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by srugglingyoungster on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:32:19 AM AEST
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wow. that is amazing and so truthfully told.
It makes me think alot about whats happened to me. Ive lost friends but the two im sooo close to now, i wanna be even closer too. Sadly enough, this poem is the only thing makeing me realize friendship. So i suppose i can give you a special thanks and keep writing!
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:07:34 PM AEST
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| JUST BEAUTIFUL! Youve got a friend in me! This was so touching and so well done I had to print it out! Loved it! Christina |
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:45:22 PM AEST
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*sniff*
Critters, this is such a beautiful, heart felt, very touching write. I have tears in my eyes. I had a friend like this, but sadly, she has passed away at a very young age. *sob* I really enjoyed reading this. It helped me remember my best friend. Thank you. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:57:12 AM AEST
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| Their friendship is golden..so precious poem this is.. a heart touching beautiful poem. venkat |
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:51:35 PM AEST
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Oh Cheri
What a beautiful poem!You really are a talented poet if I ever did see one....Thanks for sharing,I think I have someone to call right now :o)
PumpkinPie |
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:59:02 PM AEST
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WHAT A POEM! AS IT TELLS ALL ABOUT EVERY MOVE YOU MADE & UP TO EVERY FALL! IT'S EASY TO SEE WHY YOU'RE SO GREAT AT POETRY!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:33:03 AM AEST
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Wow Mom, this is heavenly beautifull!
A masterpeice.
Luv, huggs,
your brat,
emy |
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:04:44 PM AEST
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This brought back such joy and memories. Girlfriends are friends for life, aren't they? I've been blessed with so many good ones. This is so descriptive and full of warmth.
Stitch |
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Re: GIRLFRIENDS
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:26:35 PM AEST
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| When I read this a tear came to my eye. I thought of my best friend. We have been best friends for almost 8 years. We have been through everything together. We have gotten in trouble together. Every childhood memory includes her. Friends are precious dont let the good ones go! |
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