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Array ( [sid] => 42086 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Home [time] => 2004-04-06 21:44:21 [hometext] => this is a very emotional poetry,no one ever thought this tragic life would survive,but i did,please leave a comment!!!!thanx!!!! [bodytext] => everynight i go to bed
with this pillow pushed down
heavily over my ears,just
to fall asleep peacefully

knowing all the things i do
i hate my life,i hate my dad
ya thats right,i hate you
away from here,i'd be glad

no one knows the things that go on in this broken
home,so many things were hidden
my brothers and i live in a duneon
we feel we should get a gun

if only there was a way out
theres nothing we can do
my father is such a sell-out
ya dad thats you

theres alot i'm gonna hold in
theres alot i'll never tell
theres alot i wanna foreget
theres alot you should know

no one knows the things that go on in this broken
home,so many things were hidden
my brothers and i live in a duneon
we feel we should get a gun

i dream when i can,that days and nights
will get better and these tears of fears
will turn to tears of joy [comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 23 [informant] => booboo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Broken Home

Contributed by booboo on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:44:21 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

everynight i go to bed
with this pillow pushed down
heavily over my ears,just
to fall asleep peacefully

knowing all the things i do
i hate my life,i hate my dad
ya thats right,i hate you
away from here,i'd be glad

no one knows the things that go on in this broken
home,so many things were hidden
my brothers and i live in a duneon
we feel we should get a gun

if only there was a way out
theres nothing we can do
my father is such a sell-out
ya dad thats you

theres alot i'm gonna hold in
theres alot i'll never tell
theres alot i wanna foreget
theres alot you should know

no one knows the things that go on in this broken
home,so many things were hidden
my brothers and i live in a duneon
we feel we should get a gun

i dream when i can,that days and nights
will get better and these tears of fears
will turn to tears of joy

Copyright © booboo ... [ 2004-04-06 21:44:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Broken Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:13:08 PM AEST
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Sweety I don't know you but I felt ur pain. But I am going to tell you something...get help. Go to the police. They can help. My Step-Father was doing some wrong things to me for the past 7 years and i went to the police and they helped me. I mean i was homeless for a few days. living at friends houses and then a shelter but u need to get help with whatever it is that torments you. Everything will get worse before it gets better...but when it gets better...it's the best thing! God Bless you!

Re: Broken Home (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:43:51 PM AEST
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Great write! i could really understand what ur going through and like the weird girl listed above.. get help:) Or atleast talk to sum1
keep it ^
*XoXoXo*

Re: Broken Home (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:19:37 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE I LOVE IT AND CAN TOTALLY RELATE- HAVE STRENGTH

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