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Array ( [sid] => 42079 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => !!@~}~ YoUr FoRgOtEn ChILd!!~@~}~ [time] => 2004-04-06 20:48:46 [hometext] => this is dedicated to my parents [bodytext] => why am i the wrong one
why cant i be right
why cant you see me for who i am though others eyes
why must i always be compaired to my brother
why cant you be happy for who i am inside but for some reason am began to forget who i am to
is it because i keep try to be someone else for others expertions
why are you put me thuough all this pain making me feel like i cant breathe as if a pillow case is covering face while am try to sleep which cant be lift till am in the arms of the one i love
but no its geting harder to breathe to live
as you try to take him and everything i once know away
everything i knew everything i chairsh
why do you do this
why cant you love me for who i am ..... inside..... your daughter

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!!@~}~ YoUr FoRgOtEn ChILd!!~@~}~

Contributed by jmt25607 on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:48:46 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

why am i the wrong one
why cant i be right
why cant you see me for who i am though others eyes
why must i always be compaired to my brother
why cant you be happy for who i am inside but for some reason am began to forget who i am to
is it because i keep try to be someone else for others expertions
why are you put me thuough all this pain making me feel like i cant breathe as if a pillow case is covering face while am try to sleep which cant be lift till am in the arms of the one i love
but no its geting harder to breathe to live
as you try to take him and everything i once know away
everything i knew everything i chairsh
why do you do this
why cant you love me for who i am ..... inside..... your daughter

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Re: !!@~}~ YoUr FoRgOtEn ChILd!!~@~}~ (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:09:46 PM AEST
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I hate prejudice! No matter how it is dealt out. This write had alot of feeling in it and alot of hurt. I'm sorry I had to read this instead of something happy from you. Keep writing. Thumper ; 0 )

Re: !!@~}~ YoUr FoRgOtEn ChILd!!~@~}~ (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:12:06 PM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel... i realy would love to print this out and hand this to my parents and be like look.... thnx for making me realize im not the only one in the world whose parents treat them like crap and cant see the true them... :)

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