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Array ( [sid] => 4204 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SEE RIDE: [time] => 2002-09-24 11:30:00 [hometext] => I LIKE THE OCEAN AN SOME TIME IT CAN BE SCARRY,
I HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS,FROM OLD SITE BUT A LITTLE DIFFERENT. [bodytext] => WE WERE ON THIS MAIL BOAT,
GOING TO ONE OF OUR ISLAND.
WHEN WE WORE HIT BY A HUGE SHIP,
THE BOY THEM STARTED CRYING.

WAVES SO HIGH THE BOAT STARTED TO FLY,
ALL THIS IN THE MONTH OF JULY.
THE BOAT STARTED TO ROCK FROM SIDE TO SIDE,
OUR STOMAC START TO CRY.

THE CAPTAIN YELL GO RING THAT BELL.
EVERYONE STARTED YELLING,SCRAMBLING
FOR SOMETHINK TO HOLD ON TO.
THEN ALL OF A SUDDEN EVERYTHINK WHEN DIM,
WATER EVERYWERE ALL AROUND YOU.

THE SUN WAS GONE AN SO WAS THE SKY,
BOY THAT WAS SOME SCARRY RIDE.

AS WE BRAKE THROUGH THE WAVES FLYING HIGH,
WE FINNLY SPOTTED LAND,O HOW WE CRY.
THE SIGHT OF LAND FULL OUR HEARTS WITH HOPE,
AS WE FRIGHT TO KEEP THE BOAT A FLOAT.

RUNNING AGROUND ON DRY LAND,
I SAID TO MYSELF, NO MORE MAIL BOAT RIDE
FOR THIS YOUNG MAN. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 40 [informant] => RICHARD_CAMPBELL [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

SEE RIDE:

Contributed by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

WE WERE ON THIS MAIL BOAT,
GOING TO ONE OF OUR ISLAND.
WHEN WE WORE HIT BY A HUGE SHIP,
THE BOY THEM STARTED CRYING.

WAVES SO HIGH THE BOAT STARTED TO FLY,
ALL THIS IN THE MONTH OF JULY.
THE BOAT STARTED TO ROCK FROM SIDE TO SIDE,
OUR STOMAC START TO CRY.

THE CAPTAIN YELL GO RING THAT BELL.
EVERYONE STARTED YELLING,SCRAMBLING
FOR SOMETHINK TO HOLD ON TO.
THEN ALL OF A SUDDEN EVERYTHINK WHEN DIM,
WATER EVERYWERE ALL AROUND YOU.

THE SUN WAS GONE AN SO WAS THE SKY,
BOY THAT WAS SOME SCARRY RIDE.

AS WE BRAKE THROUGH THE WAVES FLYING HIGH,
WE FINNLY SPOTTED LAND,O HOW WE CRY.
THE SIGHT OF LAND FULL OUR HEARTS WITH HOPE,
AS WE FRIGHT TO KEEP THE BOAT A FLOAT.

RUNNING AGROUND ON DRY LAND,
I SAID TO MYSELF, NO MORE MAIL BOAT RIDE
FOR THIS YOUNG MAN.

Copyright © RICHARD_CAMPBELL ... [ 2002-09-24 11:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: SEE RIDE: (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 01:05:46 PM AEST
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hehe i dont blame u no more mail boat ...This was a good read...hope all is well...i was just thinking about u the other day of i hadnt read one of yours for abit .....Tanya..:-)

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