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Array ( [sid] => 42036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost … and back again..? [time] => 2004-04-06 16:25:45 [hometext] => Hard to find it back... [bodytext] => You… your mouth … your hands… your eyes…

You whisper… touch… warmth…stirring my senses… invading…
my mind exposed…vulnerability guarded…
You caress… touch… plough marks in my hair… entering…
my skin bare…nudity covered…
You see… touch… paradise… illuminating my core… besieging…
my soul set free…my essence sheltered…

Utopia
Eden
Heaven
Your arms

Cold

Impressions of another world…

Unfamiliar

Your stroking…
…murmuring…
…looks…

Received

Rage
Sorrow
Despair
Emptiness

Naked… defenseless… homeless…

SWEPT away!
Collapsed.
Diminished…

Picked up

You whisper…
You caress…
You see…
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Lost … and back again..?

Contributed by Hurretje on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:25:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You… your mouth … your hands… your eyes…

You whisper… touch… warmth…stirring my senses… invading…
my mind exposed…vulnerability guarded…
You caress… touch… plough marks in my hair… entering…
my skin bare…nudity covered…
You see… touch… paradise… illuminating my core… besieging…
my soul set free…my essence sheltered…

Utopia
Eden
Heaven
Your arms

Cold

Impressions of another world…

Unfamiliar

Your stroking…
…murmuring…
…looks…

Received

Rage
Sorrow
Despair
Emptiness

Naked… defenseless… homeless…

SWEPT away!
Collapsed.
Diminished…

Picked up

You whisper…
You caress…
You see…

Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-04-06 16:25:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost … and back again..? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:52:58 PM AEST
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ooo, this is awesome... lots of beautiful imagery!! great writing! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Lost … and back again..? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:19:13 PM AEST
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Different.... but I like that.
Nice job.

Re: Lost … and back again..? (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:18:42 PM AEST
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i like this a lot... different but terrific! I love the way you formatted it .... definatly adds character... nice work !!

Re: Lost … and back again..? (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:42:50 AM AEST
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This Is Very Good Writing Loved It..
Beautifully Done...Awesome Imagery...
Keep Em Coming :-)
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: Lost … and back again..? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:24:37 AM AEST
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WOW!!!! This was stunningly beautiful. I loved how you wrote it. *S* Cynthia

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