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staring at the door
watching as my blood
drips to the floor
wishing he will come
to save my dying soul
before my fading life
has to pay its toll
can he save me now
only time will tell
whay cant he just come
im already going to hell
but what ive done
isnt even a crime
if only i thought twice
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Fading Life

Contributed by SAT on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I sit in my room
staring at the door
watching as my blood
drips to the floor
wishing he will come
to save my dying soul
before my fading life
has to pay its toll
can he save me now
only time will tell
whay cant he just come
im already going to hell
but what ive done
isnt even a crime
if only i thought twice
thered be a next time

Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-04-06 15:11:13]
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Re: Fading Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:18:25 PM AEST
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Oh please, don't let guys be the cause of this..... they just can't see everything that goes on in our heads. They sometimes misunderstand, just like we do. Please, dont let them give you so much pain.
And please, don't cause yourself any more harm. You're only making things worse.....
I really do care, though I don't even know you. Don't forget that, OK?

God bless,
Ellen

Re: Fading Life (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:12:34 PM AEST
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i feel your pain and ur depression in your words.. all of us girls have been there... but you gotta pull through... wait for a guy who doesnt make you cry because if he does he's not the right guy... :)

Re: Fading Life (User Rating: 1 )
by MG_Akela22090 on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:54:48 PM AEST
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Absolutly beautiful. I loved the comment you gave on my poem and I wanted to say thank you. You're a wonderful writer to! I love your poetry.

~Molly~

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