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A black, heavy night, loathsome to be
Strange stars, and cosmic green atmosphere
I walk here alone, but with thousand eyes staring

A full moon sends white rays of blinding light
I hear chanters in the woods, unknown and unspoken
The black forest will swallow me, I am sure
As I walk a path which will lead me to madness

Tolerate the crawling, and faceless faiths
I walk among colorless trees and shapes
A reddish saviour, a fire which burns
But I am lost, I cannot reach the stars

Leave me now, I will bear my burden
In the woods of darkness I witness their dance
In compulsion, or delirium, I join them in chaos
A feast of the Great, a fiction of truth

Symbols are painted on the statue of Ithaqua
Blood is shed, as the stars bring their light
A sound is heard, and the rhytm grows slower
Two gleaming stars burning bright - Like eyes [comments] => 4 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 13 [informant] => gothicangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

the forest of madness

Contributed by gothicangel on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:52:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Whispering sounds, I walk in the forest
A black, heavy night, loathsome to be
Strange stars, and cosmic green atmosphere
I walk here alone, but with thousand eyes staring

A full moon sends white rays of blinding light
I hear chanters in the woods, unknown and unspoken
The black forest will swallow me, I am sure
As I walk a path which will lead me to madness

Tolerate the crawling, and faceless faiths
I walk among colorless trees and shapes
A reddish saviour, a fire which burns
But I am lost, I cannot reach the stars

Leave me now, I will bear my burden
In the woods of darkness I witness their dance
In compulsion, or delirium, I join them in chaos
A feast of the Great, a fiction of truth

Symbols are painted on the statue of Ithaqua
Blood is shed, as the stars bring their light
A sound is heard, and the rhytm grows slower
Two gleaming stars burning bright - Like eyes

Copyright © gothicangel ... [ 2004-04-06 12:52:48]
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Re: the forest of madness (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:35:55 PM AEST
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Ohhh great imagery and kinda creepy. This was awesome! Just so dark and good.
Well done.
Arden

Re: the forest of madness (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:50:30 PM AEST
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I got goose bumps and a chill. It is so creepy that its enticing to read on. I wouldn't want to read it at night! Excellent poem, truly... Kie

Re: the forest of madness (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:32:15 AM AEST
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Gee thanks for that. I appreciate insomnia.

One of the best i have read of it's kind, still got the shakes, your writes frighten me a little, and that isn't easy to do.

Silent

Re: the forest of madness (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:24:54 PM AEST
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*does not plan to walk in the forest tonight* lol, excellently vivid image filled poem:) hugs n' love nessa

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