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And now cannot fly,
The loving passion this angel brings,
Curled up today to die,

Her stone tears don’t wash away,
There beside you for life,
There’s nothing you can do or say,
To take you from her strife.

This angel was your saviour,
Now where are you to turn?
Is your life now to deter?
Or your soul to crumble and burn?
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Guardian Angel

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:54:17 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This fallen angels lost it's wings,
And now cannot fly,
The loving passion this angel brings,
Curled up today to die,

Her stone tears don’t wash away,
There beside you for life,
There’s nothing you can do or say,
To take you from her strife.

This angel was your saviour,
Now where are you to turn?
Is your life now to deter?
Or your soul to crumble and burn?

Copyright Â© corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-04-06 01:54:17]
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Re: Guardian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:53:39 AM AEST
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Stunningly beautiful yet it very sad.well written
venkat

Re: Guardian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:50:16 AM AEST
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Hey loz, dylan. Yet agian a great poem really opens ur eyes. It's nice ur sharing ur gift wif da world.

Dizza

Re: Guardian Angel (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:54:26 AM AEST
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i was walkin down the street
with some evil in my eye
some thoughts in ma head dat were makin me feel high
well me head was some boggie
and ma ears were some bass
i was walkin by my dog
when i saw this sexy face
come towards me
if she was a phone
id pick her up and dial
the fire brigade
or zero zero zero
but she stopped me in ma tracks
and i said um eh "chello chello"

woooooooo brilliant loz!!!!!!!

Also rowan is a pretty cool guy u hear wat im sayin!

Re: Guardian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by JoAnne_Buchanan on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:21:13 AM AEST
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Thanks for this beautiful write..

love
joanne buchanan

Re: Guardian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:19:29 AM AEST
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i love this, i love the way you use the angel as a symbol of how you are...very clever. i think the line that stands out most to me is "Her stone tears don’t wash away" i love this, so much pain and sadness, but such a lovely write. *hugs* phil xxx

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