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Array ( [sid] => 41956 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Of age and other things [time] => 2004-04-05 23:40:38 [hometext] => Memories of love and of being loved..... [bodytext] => Faintly, I hear your sigh
As we feel the rush of pleasure,
Fragrance of the wattle blossom
Serenely through the windows seep.

No time for idle bodies
Fingers touch and probe
Flesh that is a treasure
Of mankind after all.

Wanton desire holds
Gripping like a vice,
This-vice of pure pleasure
I gladly succumbed to.

I caress and kiss your bosom
Naked we lay together
Tender the kisses meld,
We two then into one.

Tongues, tangle explore
Places hidden in the darkness,
Tastes subliminally erotic
Boldly make escape.

Shifting within your body
Souls meld together
Only then we are one
As ecstasy drives me deep.

Now drifting lazily
We tightly hold each other
Sweat brings us even closer
As will this memory.

I still dream upon this night
Wishing her to be near
When upon the gentle breeze
A familiar scent then makes its fall.

Stabbing through the throng
Of languid faces pale
From no sun upon the skin
I look for her again.

Fog settles down upon
The river of a city
That has painted its foul odor
O'r those faces one and all.

I know that she’s not near
For she sleeps on yonder hill
Where I laid her down forever
In a sleep that has no end.

Yet I see her standing, strong
Seeking this frail and broken man
This man that has kept her living
In his heart for all this time.

Slowly I make a stand
So to call a common name
This name that I’ve not uttered
Since distant time forgot.

Shaking arms reach
Seeking her to hold
Then sadly, I feel the lash
Of reality smacking hard.

“Come on now old timer
It’s time to go to bed.
And then we’ll put the lights out
So to dream some pleasant dreams.”

I shuffle off to bed
In a room that will be my tomb
And with a sigh of sadness
I lay me down to dream, then…

Faintly I hear your sigh
As we feel the rush of pleasure
And fragrance of the wattle blossom
Serenely through the windows seep.
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Of age and other things

Contributed by twinkletoes on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:40:38 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Faintly, I hear your sigh
As we feel the rush of pleasure,
Fragrance of the wattle blossom
Serenely through the windows seep.

No time for idle bodies
Fingers touch and probe
Flesh that is a treasure
Of mankind after all.

Wanton desire holds
Gripping like a vice,
This-vice of pure pleasure
I gladly succumbed to.

I caress and kiss your bosom
Naked we lay together
Tender the kisses meld,
We two then into one.

Tongues, tangle explore
Places hidden in the darkness,
Tastes subliminally erotic
Boldly make escape.

Shifting within your body
Souls meld together
Only then we are one
As ecstasy drives me deep.

Now drifting lazily
We tightly hold each other
Sweat brings us even closer
As will this memory.

I still dream upon this night
Wishing her to be near
When upon the gentle breeze
A familiar scent then makes its fall.

Stabbing through the throng
Of languid faces pale
From no sun upon the skin
I look for her again.

Fog settles down upon
The river of a city
That has painted its foul odor
O'r those faces one and all.

I know that she’s not near
For she sleeps on yonder hill
Where I laid her down forever
In a sleep that has no end.

Yet I see her standing, strong
Seeking this frail and broken man
This man that has kept her living
In his heart for all this time.

Slowly I make a stand
So to call a common name
This name that I’ve not uttered
Since distant time forgot.

Shaking arms reach
Seeking her to hold
Then sadly, I feel the lash
Of reality smacking hard.

“Come on now old timer
It’s time to go to bed.
And then we’ll put the lights out
So to dream some pleasant dreams.”

I shuffle off to bed
In a room that will be my tomb
And with a sigh of sadness
I lay me down to dream, then…

Faintly I hear your sigh
As we feel the rush of pleasure
And fragrance of the wattle blossom
Serenely through the windows seep.




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Re: Of age and other things (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:19:26 AM AEST
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I am speachless at the beauty of this write sir.
Brilliant poetry, truly brilliant.

Larry


Re: Of age and other things (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:02:16 AM AEST
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t, I have to ditto Larry's comment. I didn't realize you could write such beautiful eroticism in such a lovely manner. Erotic yet not graphic. Beautiful and haunting. This is a magnificient piece of work.

Rita


Re: Of age and other things (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:10:23 AM AEST
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wow! that was one amazing write my friend!

wildejohnny.


Re: Of age and other things (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:36:19 AM AEST
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A timeless poem of love ... beautifully written ... Jan


Re: Of age and other things (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:39:40 PM AEST
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I don't know what to say. I'm totally in awe with this write. It's such a beautifully written piece. *S* Cynthia


Re: Of age and other things (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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Oh wow ! You are a terrific poet if I do say so myself...This was definately one of my favorite's!Do you have any idea where you took me while reading this?All I can say is WOW 1000 times....W-O-W.I'm speachless,

PumpkinPie


Re: Of age and other things (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:41:35 PM AEST
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beautiful style, flow, grace and very classy, but all i can really say is *sigh............* hugs n' love nessa


Re: Of age and other things (User Rating: 1 )
by Juliet on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:41:29 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful! I love how it comes back to the beginning in the end.




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