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Array ( [sid] => 41954 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Rope [time] => 2004-04-05 23:38:16 [hometext] => I like the darkness of this poem. So i called it a dark poem. I hope you liked it. Plz comment on it. [bodytext] => Passion has left me
Alone to die
The simple knot
I begin to tie

Was it for nothing
That I took breath
I long for peace
Found only in death

The last loupe done
I begin to cry
I tried so hard
Only to die

At the ceiling
I begin to tie
No one can say
I didn’t try

The limp rope hangs
Around my Head
I take a last look
At my gentle bed

Will you miss me
After I’m dead
I wish I could
Kiss your head

The limp rope jumps
Strait as a line
These final words
At least where mine
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The Rope

Contributed by Shadow on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:38:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Passion has left me
Alone to die
The simple knot
I begin to tie

Was it for nothing
That I took breath
I long for peace
Found only in death

The last loupe done
I begin to cry
I tried so hard
Only to die

At the ceiling
I begin to tie
No one can say
I didn’t try

The limp rope hangs
Around my Head
I take a last look
At my gentle bed

Will you miss me
After I’m dead
I wish I could
Kiss your head

The limp rope jumps
Strait as a line
These final words
At least where mine

Copyright Â© Shadow ... [ 2004-04-05 23:38:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Rope (User Rating: 1 )
by niki on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:37:11 AM AEST
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I really heard your words they touched me
i think it is a great write i have read a few of your writings and i think i will read more.

niki

Re: The Rope (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:06:49 AM AEST
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This would be kind of tough to put in a category, it is dark but it could also be put into suicide. Really good write, I found it kind of sad as well.
~JadedExistence~

Re: The Rope (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:31:41 AM AEST
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There are different descriptions of dark but I think this one is the most true since it depicts the darkness in the heart. Very well written! bitter one, hey I hope you're still there reading this comment! Lol! Keep hanging to the rope but with your hands not neck! Awesome write!
Anne :D

Re: The Rope (User Rating: 1 )
by Alli on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:44:07 AM AEST
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Very beautifully written, touching, emotional. I love this poem for so many reasons.

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