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Array ( [sid] => 41917 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => goodbye karma mommy loves you [time] => 2004-04-05 19:49:40 [hometext] => plz rate this and send in comment tell me if any thing like this ever happen to you because i feel like am the only one going though this right now [bodytext] => God took you away.
It doesn't seem fair,
but in the back of my mind,
you will always be there.
i never did see u , but still u were a part of me
i wish are paths would have crossed,
and your absence in this world,
is to me a great loss.

You were too young to die not even one, and
too innocent to feel that pain.
Only heaven benefits,
because you it has now gained.

I may think of you more or less
with each passing day,
but your strength is something I won't forget,
you have changed me in a way.

I wish for you eternal peace;
that's what you deserve karma.
I hope I live my life well enough
to meet up with you in the end. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 52 [informant] => jmt25607 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

goodbye karma mommy loves you

Contributed by jmt25607 on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:49:40 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

God took you away.
It doesn't seem fair,
but in the back of my mind,
you will always be there.
i never did see u , but still u were a part of me
i wish are paths would have crossed,
and your absence in this world,
is to me a great loss.

You were too young to die not even one, and
too innocent to feel that pain.
Only heaven benefits,
because you it has now gained.

I may think of you more or less
with each passing day,
but your strength is something I won't forget,
you have changed me in a way.

I wish for you eternal peace;
that's what you deserve karma.
I hope I live my life well enough
to meet up with you in the end.

Copyright © jmt25607 ... [ 2004-04-05 19:49:40]
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Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:19:13 PM AEST
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This is heart breaking....if it's what I think it is about...
I can identify with it..
Jenni

Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:47:11 PM AEST
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Heartbreaking is right......deeply moving.

Very well done
Roses
Larry

Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you (User Rating: 1 )
by Drake on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:13:28 PM AEST
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Very touching...good write as well

Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:06:26 AM AEST
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OMG this really touched me,so very sad! Christina

Re: goodbye karma mommy loves you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:29:47 PM AEST
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I don't normally comment with one of my own works, but I just wanted you to know, I share in your grief.You are not alone.

Titled: The Angels Called.....
The angels came from mounted high,
Cradled his soul I don't know why.
Wrapped in fleece-like softened wings.
Silenced now he no longer sings.

Nestled within a tidal womb.
Fertile bed becomes a tomb.
Shrouded in the serene abode.
A vacant place his body stowed.

Earthbound duty not his call,
A rain of stars on him did fall.
Whisked away before I could hold.
A lifeless body lay there cold.

Summoned to be an angel himself.
Journey of breath put on a shelf.
Though I miss his earthly duty.
I savor now his angelic beauty.

God bless......

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