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Array ( [sid] => 41916 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i wrote this to my baby which i lost [time] => 2004-04-05 19:46:36 [hometext] => when everything was simple [bodytext] => Everything was simple
Everything was fine
I knew I couldn't have you
And I knew why

I tried to move on
I tried to 4get
But when i sleep at night
And I knew, to myself I lied.i really do need u really more than u need me

i noticed you drifting that u may not come
i said to myself
I didn't want to loose you
So, I tried to deal with the pain.all this pain that i may lose u

It's hard no i almost had u
It gets harder each day
knowing i will neverlook in to your eyes
i never be able to hold ur hand a cross the road

I miss the way it used to be
You don't feel the change
You don't know I really love you
I'm sure to you, it's just a game

As I close my eyes tonight
I'll pray as I was taught to do
I'll pray that you realize that
I love you, but I can't have you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 52 [informant] => jmt25607 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

i wrote this to my baby which i lost

Contributed by jmt25607 on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:46:36 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Everything was simple
Everything was fine
I knew I couldn't have you
And I knew why

I tried to move on
I tried to 4get
But when i sleep at night
And I knew, to myself I lied.i really do need u really more than u need me

i noticed you drifting that u may not come
i said to myself
I didn't want to loose you
So, I tried to deal with the pain.all this pain that i may lose u

It's hard no i almost had u
It gets harder each day
knowing i will neverlook in to your eyes
i never be able to hold ur hand a cross the road

I miss the way it used to be
You don't feel the change
You don't know I really love you
I'm sure to you, it's just a game

As I close my eyes tonight
I'll pray as I was taught to do
I'll pray that you realize that
I love you, but I can't have you

Copyright © jmt25607 ... [ 2004-04-05 19:46:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: i wrote this to my baby which i lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:04:14 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.. deeply touching...
Jenni

Re: i wrote this to my baby which i lost (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:08:02 AM AEST
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I dont think I could finish reading this it was so sad! especially since I just had a daughter 4 weeks ago! I really feel for you! Christina

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