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Array ( [sid] => 41899 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => nothigns changed [time] => 2004-04-05 17:58:26 [hometext] => i was doing all the things i felt i should before i killed myself, kinda hoping they would make me realise some purpose or sumthing but, well it didnt [bodytext] => I watched the sun rise,
I watched the sun set,
And nothing changed.
I said I'm sorry,
I said I love you,
And nothing changed.
I breathed in the air,
I swam in the sea,
And nothing changed.
There's still no will
Still no want
For life.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 43 [informant] => spider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
nothigns changed

Contributed by spider on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 05:58:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I watched the sun rise,
I watched the sun set,
And nothing changed.
I said I'm sorry,
I said I love you,
And nothing changed.
I breathed in the air,
I swam in the sea,
And nothing changed.
There's still no will
Still no want
For life.




Copyright © spider ... [ 2004-04-05 17:58:26]
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Re: nothigns changed (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:44:12 PM AEST
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yes........profoundly real feelings.......this is a grief process that takes a lifetime.......and you have a lifetime of people who will understand.........


Re: nothigns changed (User Rating: 1 )
by trialnerror on Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 02:13:32 AM AEST
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keep your hopes up , somthing is bound to change ur perspective of life. it takes time but eventually somthing good will happen to earse all the bad in ur life.




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