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Array ( [sid] => 41844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Born and Raised [time] => 2004-04-05 10:44:54 [hometext] => This would make a great song, with a ***** bass drum and a 7 string acoustic guitar, nij nij nee nij nij nee fall backwards...lol [bodytext] => Born and raised
Dead and Lowered
Live Forward
Fall Backwared

These are the days,
In which we die
The bald eagle says,
Which way to fly

Born and raised
Dead and Lowered
Live Forward
Fall Backward

Do you stare at the sun,
Do you believe in stars,
Do you think were having fun,
Getting *****-faced in bars

The pun is kinda funny
The life is elementary
The eggs are kinda runny
The ones we hatched out off

Born and Raised
Dead and Lowered
Live Forward
Fall Backward

So here we go a hundred miles
Through the dessert of the real
So hot and without tiles
Feel your skin and feet peel

This is the reality that we percieve,
This the abnormality that we believe
This is not our fallen angel,
Just another nutcase with a bottle of J&D
Who's blind in three eyes,
And says WE cannot see

Born and Lowered
Dead and Raised
Live Backward
Fall Forward

MY INSANITY IS MY REALITY [comments] => 4 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 21 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Born and Raised

Contributed by alecfernadez on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:44:54 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Born and raised
Dead and Lowered
Live Forward
Fall Backwared

These are the days,
In which we die
The bald eagle says,
Which way to fly

Born and raised
Dead and Lowered
Live Forward
Fall Backward

Do you stare at the sun,
Do you believe in stars,
Do you think were having fun,
Getting *****-faced in bars

The pun is kinda funny
The life is elementary
The eggs are kinda runny
The ones we hatched out off

Born and Raised
Dead and Lowered
Live Forward
Fall Backward

So here we go a hundred miles
Through the dessert of the real
So hot and without tiles
Feel your skin and feet peel

This is the reality that we percieve,
This the abnormality that we believe
This is not our fallen angel,
Just another nutcase with a bottle of J&D
Who's blind in three eyes,
And says WE cannot see

Born and Lowered
Dead and Raised
Live Backward
Fall Forward

MY INSANITY IS MY REALITY




Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-04-05 10:44:54]
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Re: Born and Raised (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:49:34 PM AEST
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ohh i think this rocks. why hasnt this gotten any comment?!
just a awesome write. well done. loved it.
Arden


Re: Born and Raised (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:12:49 PM AEST
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Wow I really really enjoyed reading this, I think it would make an excellent song! Congrats to you for creating a great poem.


Re: Born and Raised (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:34:04 AM AEST
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Alec, this was a very very good write... i am surprised no one commented on it before arden... i appriciate the heads up i get pretty stuck doing one thing i forget to take the time to check out something new. thank you for sharing this with me

Lindsey


Re: Born and Raised (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:50:47 AM AEST
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Very well written. I love the flow.




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