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You show off
Your dark features covered in shining jewels
Dancing so slowly
Sensual glancing
And myriad winks
As to expose your deepest secrets
You most intimate virtues
Your hiddent treasures

You reveal more and more
In this never ending striptease
Layer after layer
You make my craving grow
Tormenting
Aching
Begging

But never will I see
Who you really are
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Striptease

Contributed by Hurretje on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:25:23 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

As I watch you
You show off
Your dark features covered in shining jewels
Dancing so slowly
Sensual glancing
And myriad winks
As to expose your deepest secrets
You most intimate virtues
Your hiddent treasures

You reveal more and more
In this never ending striptease
Layer after layer
You make my craving grow
Tormenting
Aching
Begging

But never will I see
Who you really are
Behind the stars

Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-04-05 03:25:23]
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Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:28:05 AM AEST
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yeah i'll go for sensual but would have preffered indecent!. nice write.

wildejohnny.

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:41:40 AM AEST
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SOMETIMES YOU CAN'T SEE THE WHOLE PICTURE! MAYBE IT'S FOR THE BETTER!!
COOL POEM!!!
DAN!!!!

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:03:50 AM AEST
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Very good !
Very intense!
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 04:04:02 AM AEST
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Definitely sensual, and I liked the twist at the end. Great write as usual.

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 05:53:20 AM AEST
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Nice one :) Nothing wrong with a little indecency, lol

Silent

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:32:49 AM AEST
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The best writes are those that let the imagination do the work, as this one did.
Very well done
Larry

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:01:44 AM AEST
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well done
michelle

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:22:28 AM AEST
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Good write, and a great thought, know not the package by the wrapping.

Thanks for sharing.

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 06:58:18 PM AEST
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nicely done. i really like this. keep it up.
Arden

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:43:28 AM AEST
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I agree with Rakerman. I feel there is no indecency. but for the painting of sensual beauty..welldone. venkat

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:20:28 PM AEST
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you definatly painted a very mysterious image.... nice work... :)

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by Thivanka on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:31:27 AM AEST
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GREAT! a good mood stabilizer, I liked this one.
-Thivanka

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:24:33 PM AEST
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it all seems like you are writing about what your experiencing until the ending; which makes it seem dreamlike.... wonderful poem:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Striptease (User Rating: 1 )
by AEWorricker on Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 04:26:18 AM AEST
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Great write - love "myriad winks"

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